Reviews for He Will Never Touch You Like This
visitor chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Ah, yeah... well.. that was... graphic. Uhm... sorry, my mind is just... elsewhere... or something. I think I'm gonna go outside and roll around in the snow or...*staresoffintospace* God, you're awesome.
Forks4Lovers chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
Good God that was hot.
Stalle chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
No wonder you won *fans self* that was HOT! Congrats!
Sacred Burning chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
OhMyGod...
dontbevain chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
YAY!

Haha, obviously. This was so nicely written. Out of control possessive Edward, oh drool.
Leah Lestrange Black chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
ok first of all

YOU ARE AMAZING

keep writting

o.O

I was like "OMFG" all the time...

like everyone here, I need a cold shower hahahaha

really good, keep going like that...

Don't have words to describe how good your fiction is
klarsen117 chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Just finished reading it and I loved it. Good job with it!
sexyredrose chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Wow...that was amazing and HOT! Loved it!
jslack chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
HOT story! Loved it!
quxar chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
whoohoo! great chapter lol. did u make a squeal? i'd read it in a heart beat lol. loved it!
Ms. Leading08 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Wow, that was extremely graphic...in a good way :)

My only critisism is the dialogue. Mostly Edward. Just some of it seemed a little unrealistic for someone to say out loud. There were some parts where I just wanted to go "Jesus Edward, shut up!" lol. But maybe I was just too impatient for all the dirty stuff to happen...

Other than that, great job!
ash12234 chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Hot damn! That story was sexyy and hot. You are an amazing writer. I look forward to reading more of your stories...though this would be a nice one to expand on...especially the desert portion ;)
GirChic chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Wow, that was amazing! Your descriptions made it so easy to visualise and... goddamn that was hot. That was an awesome piece of erotica right there. It head a really good lead-up as well.

Well done!
writergirl135 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
HMFS! no wonder u won the DTE contest. that wa amazing. u have a real flare for DTE and lemons. please continue writing and congratulations on first place. u deserve it more than anyone else.
DarklingLinny chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
WOW! That was just so...wow
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