|Reviews for Hot Chips|
| fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
The clarifications of what is meant by each of the conversations was a favorite part of this story. I simply adore how you managed to make the ordinary anything but...and the subtle tease in of humor always appeared at just the right time. Who wouldn't want to try a tomato sauce sandwich?
| Wintry Leen chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
I don't read AU SasuSaku humor fics so this is indeed a refreshing read!
I know it's been seven years since you published this but I just want to let you know that this old work of yours has already displayed what potential you have as a writer who can keep his/her readers until the story is finished.
I think it's because of your style - quick, casual, but has an intriguing flavor to it. Some sentences might use a bit more commas, but the way you juggle between describing the present moment and narrating the past instances leading to the former is engaging.
I totally enjoyed this fic. Thank you!
[I'll try to read your current fics soon!]
| Caelum Isleen chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
This was adorable and yet you managed to keep Sasuke in character. Awesome job, I loved it!
| uchiha.sakura.23 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
nice. but weird
| NoRainNoRainbow chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
| SakuFlame chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
i like it, :D
| candyluver chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Wow. No offense...but that's kind of gross, Sasuke! xD Lol. But cute story though. :D
| msiaNKB chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
whoa. deja vu, my sister is same like your mom! wow.
btw nice story
| SasuSaku Forever and Ever chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
| smooth.stutter chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
| blah0ily chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
this story is so adorable.
amazing sasusaku story (:
| summerlover1 chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Ew tomato sauce sandwiches nasty...
aw guys r so slow at realizing how they feel about someone.
sweet fic, loved it
| TigerLilyette chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
| rayi-san chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
I love it. 5 stars for you! please make another chapter. I enjoyed the detail. Omg you are a genuis
| kattylin chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
and what's wrong with eating tomato sandwiches (pout) i always eat cherry tomatoes while watching tv and or surfing the net... whihc reminds me, we're kinda going outta stock of tomatoes... hm, me gotta go buy already...