Reviews for Breaking and Entering
luxurykill chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
I don't think I'm alone when I say "knees up, legs spread" is probably the hottest thing that I've ever heard, especially coming from Edward. Wowza.
hot4edward chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Whew! That was hot, and great! But I think they really need to replace the bed!
MCRshortstackedme chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
amazing is this more then a 2 part story?

:D
bellasblush chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Yeah, if I was compared to my sibling I would want to step it up too. Very hot!
writergirl135 chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
gotta love the smut. if that was really edward after breakingdawn without renesmee, i would totally sell my soul to have been bella rite .funny, but true.:-)
Clancy67 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Oh my f*ing God! This story could not have been any hotter. I love your Edward. Thanks for sharing your sexy, dominating Edward!
God and the Fox chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
I just want to say that this is hot. Not in a "I'm so gansta that I can use words like that" way, but in a sexually intense way. I can totally imagine Edward doing that, and omg, if he did. Great story.
Jamillia chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
AMAZING! I loved it.
lucy the divaqueen chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
m. i like to think that it's mike newton's house they crashed in ...XD
Cariganna chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Yup, that was hot. I loved the conversation in the beginning, delving into the WHY of the hot-and-steamy. Very nice D
twilight-fedishfreak chapter 2 . 12/8/2008
i loved it it was smazing!
Sabelina chapter 2 . 12/3/2008
Not bad
JenniferC77 chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Holy crow! I was nodding mutely right along with Bella! Incredible! Jenn.
vixen1836 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Hottest line?

He caressed me, from head to thigh as a purr left his chest.

That whole story was beautiful. Eloquent, descrptive and incredibly erotic. Wonderful, job. What a hot idea...goodness. I love your articulate Edward. A
BloodyLittleMinx chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Amazing. This was truly fantastic. I can't wait to read whatever else you've written.

~Minx
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