Reviews for Breaking and Entering
acct purged chapter 2 . 11/3/2008
why do i love it so when they break the furniture...
NoLongerWritingFF chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Great Story love the ending!
TigerLilyFire chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
This is what went through my mind every other freaking line:

"Shit thats hot."

"Shit thats hot."


and then a rounding chorus of:


Excellent! It was smut, but...classy smut. Does that make sense? Classy domination? Whatever, thats what this was...
asdfgjdksla chapter 2 . 11/2/2008
Soo. It was wonderful. Just wanted to say that I use that account name on everything else. I think it's awesome that you have the name. Where did you get it from? Haha, I tried on this website to use it, but it was already taken. go figure.
Tiggrmommi chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
edwardcullenissosexy chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
it was a great idea, and you did pretty good writing it, but there's something that's been pissing me off for a while. I'm not sure if it's these contests tht everyone reads and then gets this idea in their head or what, and I promise it isn't just you, but

EDWARD WOULD TOTALLY FU** BELLA! He would NOT be gentle with her until she wanted more and begged it from him. They f**king rip each other's clothes off in breaking dawn! jeez!

also, THEY DON'T NEED TO STOP. unless they had a reason to, they wouldn't. they would just keep going or switch positions or something.

sorry for taking my anger out on you...
RitaRitaMargarita chapter 2 . 10/26/2008
Um fabulous!
byhelenahandbasket chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Holy Hell woman! You are the master of smut, I think. W-O-W!
hammondgirl chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Pretty hot my dear. I do wish he took her from behind too though. Maybe they broke the couch later? Ha ha!
InsaneGrizzlies chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Damn, EDWARD! There's beds here, and you can use them anytime... and if you need any help, I'm here!
luvrofink chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
so hot. thank you.
bug2001 chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Excellent ;)
iamawickedchild chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
LOVED IT! possesive/jelaous Edward is very very HOT!
CallistoLexx chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Oh. My. GOD! That was HOT. doesn't even begin to cover it. This was absolutely amazing. I loved it. Damn, that was hot! That's the thought that's reverberating through my mind right now. You are the Mistress of Smut.
marauder-fangirl chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
That was HOT!
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