|Reviews for Wait|
| LouiseUchiha chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
He cant accept it...We neither :(
| Trapped-in-your-asylum chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
| starkiest chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Wow oh wow! That was adorable! That was your first, you say? Very well done. Souji is so cute!
| soji chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
aww not bad I enjoyed it!
| Tessia chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
| Sky Rider chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Well, one thing is for sure. This is definitely a SoujixHijikata fic. The idea has potential, but overall, there doesn’t seem to be any real plot here (at least not yet). It was fairly well written, but I found it to be rather empty in substance.
Keep writing. You might have a valid idea here. Just don't get too caught up in wanting feedback that you don't ever finish a piece that you're writing. To me, that's what this story sounds like. A nice beginning...