Reviews for Promises, Promises
someweirdgirl chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
this was really good but it seems like it's not done to me like it could be made into a chapter story.

Just a suggestion.

good job!
PhantomsAngel1988 chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
loved it!
LadyT02k chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Loved it lol but it also seems like it could be an intresting story. Do you think you might carry it on ?
edwardandbellabelong2gether chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Really liked that one!
kuntrygal chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Loved it!
juju84 chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
OMG, this is SO HOT! Girl, you just MUST write a continuation. Please, please, PLEASE I'm begging you!
Ms.Lea chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
hehe I LOVED this story! :) good detail.. and very lemony! :) good job!
jadesabre75 chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Even though I saw that coming it was still an awesome read! You could almost make a story out of this! Great writing!
Phantom-writer3739 chapter 1 . 10/24/2008

you have got to continue this.


man, every time i read an entry for the dte contest i'm not sure if i'm hoping it's awesome so i have something good to read or if i'm (selfishly) hoping it's rubbish so that i don't have any competiton.

no competition here-you left me behind staring at your fast disappearing figure.

awesome, really it is.
BlissfulDesire chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
O! This was hot! You should continue it, it would be really good.
Kayanne chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
That was so HOT! You really set up the should add more chapters!
Russian-Angel-92 chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
lol, that would be awkward
twilightluva4lyph08 chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
what can i FRICKEN LOVED IT PLEEZ PLEEZ PLEZ DO ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEEZ! im practically begging! lolz i relly enjoyed it p CRYSTAL
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