Reviews for hogwarts protector
Myrachan8 chapter 7 . 12/8/2012
WHEN YOU GOING TO UPDAtE!
nice story, look for my reviews in the future! :D

Myra
WordSmyth chapter 7 . 8/1/2012
Malfoy should tell off Sam and then Danny should get PISSED and the rooms temp drops by thirty degrees.
SakuraDragomir chapter 7 . 11/2/2011
hey waz up

can u write more of this story plz? if u can

i love danny phantom and harry potter

i hope i can read more of ur stories

ttyl

-yuuki kuran

queen of the night
Seven of Clubs chapter 7 . 4/22/2011
Why must you leave it as a cliffhanger!

Nice story, but remember to capitalize at the start of every sentence. Sometimes you forget.
MerlinIsEmrys chapter 4 . 3/13/2011
lol. get yourself a cat. lol
Danni99981 chapter 7 . 2/18/2011
update or i shall vertully slap u! BEWARE!
Protego Totalum chapter 7 . 10/13/2010
i like! update soon please!
Biisaiyowaq chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Trying not to sound mean, but your writing is very choppy. And Dumbledore wouldn't have revealed the wizarding world so quickly, especially with Jazz there. Sorry if this sounds rude or anything! :(

Biia
Jiyle chapter 7 . 6/15/2010
Malfoy. :P
Jiyle chapter 3 . 6/15/2010
English isn't your first language, is it?
Tiger Phanbutt chapter 7 . 5/5/2010
coolio! great story! It's gotten alot better since spellcheck!
raaka the demon fox chapter 5 . 4/6/2010
okay im gonna be brutally truthful you spelling sucks and you have no capitals its a good story your writing talent is very raw but not to great work on it and ill grade you after the next chapter. Ps ghost thats how its spelt good luck
PhantomGirl1223 chapter 7 . 3/20/2010
I loved your story, update soon -
Random Flyer chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Hi! Your basic idea for this story is interesting. I would be interested in reading a story with this premise.

My biggest suggestion would be work on you grammer. You need to polish your writing to make it presentable and it will be more appealing for readers. Things like capitalizing words at the beginning of a sentence and proper nouns is essential.

It would also help to add in more description, the setting the day, people's actions and personalities. Assume the reader doesn't know what you're talking about and work from there, showing them your story rather than telling them.

Hope you keep writing!
Mrs Alexandra Phantom chapter 2 . 11/29/2009
this stinks you didn't even cap the names of people or places! you know like Danny or Jasmine. Or Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Seriously!
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