Reviews for Fallout
genuinef250 chapter 4 . 7/21/2009
Cool twists, so is this Bella/Jasper, or Bella/Edward? No matter which I like so far.
Robin.D chapter 4 . 7/11/2009
omg that was good.. :)
Robin.D chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
oops Alice is home lol good chapter... :):)
Robin.D chapter 2 . 7/11/2009
good chapter.. :):)
Robin.D chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
wow good chapter.. :)
The Predatory Wasp chapter 4 . 6/28/2009
this was good.

very interesting. i liked chapter 3 best.
Rainbowedngt chapter 4 . 6/5/2009
Oh I do hope you update soon!

I love this story
ebonyeyez1 chapter 4 . 4/22/2009
This is such a great story. Too bad it hasnt been updated in a while. Hopefully you will.
ElleCC chapter 4 . 2/20/2009
Liked it! Good job with all of the characterizations. Poor unsated Bella...

Looking forward to the sequel :)
Purpleite chapter 4 . 1/29/2009
I loved your story, especially the ending though i think it needs another chapter wherein edward and bella finally resolve their problems.
UpYourCupcake chapter 4 . 1/28/2009
OMG this is awesome, please continue )

I am loving it...and oh man you can really portray Jasper well.
Slywolf9 chapter 4 . 1/26/2009
Hahaha. This was quite funny, and quite appealing.

I really did enjoy this. Must read the second part.

NanMcCullen chapter 4 . 1/24/2009
That was either very brave of Jasper, or very stupid. lol Loved it! Going to read the sequel now.
NanMcCullen chapter 3 . 1/24/2009
Of course Alice saw the whole thing too. Wow. This is suspenseful. But in hindsight, it's kind of Edward's fault for getting Bella all worked up and then stopping cold turkey. That's beyond wrong. It's cruel and unusual torture!
NanMcCullen chapter 2 . 1/24/2009
I can't tell you how frustrated and angry I was with Edward throughout the whole saga for putting Bella through that. He KNEW that he passion for him was pretty much uncontrollable. I think the best word for him would be a tease. He's very much like that in this story too.
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