Reviews for The Vampire Detective: Omake
Guest chapter 10 . 10/24/2013
Hey, if you are still writing these omakes... Could you do one where ran finds out about shinichi sleeping like the dead? I'm curious about what that was like.
Trancemaster62 chapter 10 . 3/31/2010
Shinichi & Ran at the pics together - enjoyed that. Rool on Chapter 11!
YumeTakato chapter 10 . 3/29/2010
XD Aha~ I enjoyed it.
YumeTakato chapter 8 . 11/2/2009
X3 adroable. I loved it.
Trancemaster62 chapter 7 . 11/1/2009
Ruddy hell thats short! Shinichi singing "Murder on the Dancefloor" oh *~#$$! I'd LOVE to see that, it would be a riot!
YumeTakato chapter 7 . 11/1/2009
XD I enjoyed that.
me chapter 5 . 6/30/2009
gotta love Hattori
66ButterflyOfDarkness99 chapter 5 . 5/5/2009
hehehehe...Habuka is too easy and funny to pick on...x3

Yay! You're still thinking about this story! That gives me hope to read more about this great fic *pops in cookies*
Digeridoodler chapter 5 . 5/5/2009
*Hugglez Hakub-chan* I lurvs dat guy X3 Good chap goods chap... *waits patiently staring for next chapter of TVD2* OwO
Digeridoodler chapter 4 . 3/26/2009
*flails arms* 8D Omg yay! Another Omake! Nice job, too :3 I love the vampire jokes X3 Nice references ;3 O I do hope you'll update Vampire Detective 2 soon, right? OwO *drools*
Sazerac chapter 4 . 3/26/2009

I like it!

...bleargh, ran out of decent review quota [10 00O characters] a while ago, really can't think of anything okay to say...

Well, like I promised myself, I'll give my opinion as both a reader and a writer (as if I wrote it myself and what I'd change).

Uhm, the only thing I can really find is that you have this bit in the first paragraph:


On one side were Kudo Shinichi, high school detective and still getting used to being a vampire, complete with predatory instincts. Next to him is Hattori Heiji, also a detective, although with a hotheadedness that balances out with the half-English Hakuba Saguru himself who is sitting opposite him.


And I'm not so sure about the first 'were'.

But other then that, it's great. As a writer's opinion, anyway, since you pretty much covered everything sometime else.


66ButterflyOfDarkness99 chapter 4 . 3/26/2009
hehehehe...poor Shinichi...meanie Kaito-kun picking up on him...X3

Though, it did make me laugh...XD You should put more vampire jokes! Maybe you could make Ran say a few too, the look on Shinichi's face would be priceless...XD

Oh, one more things...Heiji choosing the nick Queen...*rolls on the floor laughing*
Sazerac chapter 3 . 1/8/2009
Well this chapter was weird...

It's pretty good. It is, but not really my style...

That's the thing.

Ah well, off to review TVD!
Sazerac chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
I love this chapter.

It's awesomely excellent. It's more epic without dialogue:

"Complete with a note from the Kid, thanking Nakamori and his Task Force for playing with him the previous weekend."

Poor guy, you almost have to pity him. If not for the fact that his screaming totally kills that thought.
Sazerac chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
When I first read this I didn't get it...but now I do, after kinda re-reading TVD twice.

Yeah, it is a Very Bad Day. Poor Heiji!

I like the way you characterized him. It really seems like him, not overdone and...hmm, I forgot what I was going to say...

Oh well.
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