|Reviews for On the Run|
| Illeana Starbright chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
And what happened next? You do know this is a truly horrid place to stop writing! (In other words please update soon... hint,hint)
| CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
A great story. Very good.
| Tera Earth chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Not bad so far. Definitely an interesting idea. Wonder if anyone else has thought of it? Anyways, it has possibilities. Though towards the bottom half, the placement of the words is rather weird.
| That's my Mango chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
wow, I thought he would escape and it would go on as a story nice writing
| TheWater'sChild chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Nice story but could you double space the next chapters it was a little hard to read.