Reviews for What She Needs
Serenissime chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Wow, You could develop a great story from this. Add a bit more character development in this first chapter and one could go on and on!
feja chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Amazing o/s
ERiCA BOO BOO x3 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
justginger chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
I have just read this and I loved it!
Nat3628 chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
loved it! It would have been cool to see you extend it to see how she would react to find out that she had sex with a vampire without even knowing it.
maggiejoma chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
nice lemon...:)
InuxKagsForever chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Hehe, this was so hot. I could definitely imagine this. Great job!
jansails chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
An enjoyable, voyeuristic journey into fantasy & dreams made into reality.

Packs a powerful punch of lust, desire, erotica.

Well done.

Babe Pryor chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
yup, its a keeper! I would love to meet this Edward any day! xx
youngandmature chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Hot. And a complelling story.

I have a question though: were E and B supposed to be virgins with no prior sexual experience in this fic?
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
This was HOT! JFC...I need a shower!
smelsies chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
That was an awesome story and I totally loved it.
roblover2 chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
I loved the story and for a first you did a great job. Lots of editing problems and Edward got out of his car twice to take Bella into hois house. Maybe you will have a beta next time to help with spelling and punctuation. Keep up the good stories. Already added to my favorites
Wendyg63 chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Its nice to see Edward act like a teenager and go for what he wanted.

Bella didn't sound like a virgin at their coupling - something that I thought would have been a consideration at some point.

Either way...good one shot.
darkbutterfly2011 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
loved it it was awesome i cant wait to read more of your stories well i thought it was a really hot and amazing one shot
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