Reviews for The One I'm Waiting For
Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 8 . 3/7/2011
Kool keep going
MagHal chapter 8 . 3/11/2009
That was such a hot and great story

Being more descriptive makes it more...arousing to say the least

i liked it alot you are good D
imakeeper chapter 8 . 12/27/2008
write the tommy trying to rape hunter, the tommy spying on jason, etc! it needs a sequel
imakeeper chapter 7 . 12/27/2008
“Let’s just say spending enough with Kat develops a Yaoi sense.”

that was awesome as was the jacob-kim exchange about colors
Kyoshiro-Crimson-King chapter 8 . 12/26/2008
Fucking hot ending, this was a great fic!
Whispering Ranger chapter 8 . 12/25/2008
... IT'S FINISHED? Dude, c'mon! This story was some perfectly good plowing...

Anyway, this chapter was great! _ I liked the Hunter/Casey non-sex moments (there should've been more of them) and the sex moments were great as well, I enjoyed them :)
Kyoshiro-Crimson-King chapter 7 . 12/4/2008
Great chapter!
Whispering Ranger chapter 7 . 12/3/2008
Yummy... I love! :D It's cute _ Well, except for the Kim/Jason smut... me no like :0 But you saw that one coming...

Anyway, I love how you pulled in the RYF! I love that gang XD But poor Hunter and Casey when they show up.. :0

The ending was funny! Made me smile :) Good job!
imakeeper chapter 6 . 11/17/2008
Yellowwolf chapter 6 . 11/12/2008
The recaps are a good idea but this one was half the chapter, I was about to point to you, you posted the same chapter _ I'd make them shorter if I were you.

Apart from that, cute chapter. I can just imagine Hunter's perverted grin.
Whispering Ranger chapter 6 . 11/11/2008
Yumm... *drools* Wait... why am I blushing? Darn you for giving me red cheeks! _

Anyway, this was...well...yumm! XD It's fluffy and cute, yet funny, and yet again hot _ I like it alot! :D Great job, this chapter is excellent!
Kyoshiro-Crimson-King chapter 6 . 11/11/2008
That was hot. Really good chapter. How big is Hunters dick inchwise?
Yellowwolf chapter 5 . 10/28/2008
*giggles* Cute
Kyoshiro-Crimson-King chapter 5 . 10/28/2008
Great chapter!
April Dawn Irene chapter 5 . 10/27/2008
Oh man I wasn't expecting another chapter so soon! Maybe some more of the rest of the story, without so much sex... (Though those parts are good too)
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