|Reviews for The Dance of an Angel and a Vampire|
| Lord of the Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
| The Wandering Ballpoint chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
So, first of all.
An angel and a vampire? Hello? A "sexy" vampire? Twilight much? Maybe this belongs in the new crossover section.
second. Everything moves way, way, to fast. You could devote a whole chapter to each paragraph.
Third; is Ginny's dad an angel to? how does that work?
Fourth; he saves her, they have sex. EXCUSE ME? WTF? I have no problems with sex, but in that circumstance it is so... wrong. How long has she known him? And if she really is an angel, isn't there a clause about no prenaptual sex? are they still 11?
| wizmage chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
| mcgurrin chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
I like it.
| Maharet11 chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
You're right, this story did turn out rather well. It's beautifuly written, and the song definatly sets the correct mood. My only issue is that sexual activity at the ages of 11 and 12 is unusual, but I suppose it is possible. Overall, it was very well written; keep up the good work.
| ThisArtWar chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
cute story. Kinda fast moving. Would have been better if it was a bit longer but other than that it was great and i liked it ) Concrete Angel is also one of my fav songs D