Reviews for Marble
euphoria92 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Yaoi or not, I loved it all the same!

Aidouxzero is a pairing I have gradually come to love. I did not believe in it initially but they grew on me with their bickering xD

This pairing has a lot of potential *.*

Ah your fic was heartbreaking, especially the last part. Also, I loved your characterization of aidou. He is so much stronger than people give him credit for. Devoted aidou ftw! xD

Thank you for sharing.

~ your fan xP
increak96 chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
It was really good! I liked it! I kinda wish it was longer... :) Maybe you can do a part two? REALLY GOOD! LOVED IT! and no, that wouldn't count as yaoi... at least i don't think so... :D
DeathNote2223 chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
This was really good! I love the couple! Keep it up!
RukiRomance chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
-sigh- Oh Aidou, you will never truly understand the untouchable heart of Zero...

This is one of those pairings that are usually overlooked. I, however, love to see how they are written!

I think this is a pairing that would prove really difficult to write (if I were to give it a go). But you did very well!


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Siraun chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
This is really NICE!
YenGirl chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
The treasured marble makes an appearance! *waves thumbs up*

You have an interesting style of writing but Aido's characterisation shone through very clearly... as did his idolation of Kaname-sama of course :)

LOL, I'd say Yuuki not only sentenced a severe punishment for Aido, she punished Zero too, for making him ensure the blond's company! *giggles*

Aido and Zero conflict is always fun. Add the Bloody Rose and it's even more delicious! I'd almost wish blood had been drawn but still...

The ending was bittersweet - Aido's realisation of where he truly stands with his beloved leader.

Well done!
simply anonymous chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
interesting. i liked it. good job!
Couture.Kisses chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
i think i worship you now.

haha aido and zero equals love!

i'm not all into yaoi with a exception

of few couples, and this is being one of them

its just too uber sexy. loved the way you wrote it!