|Reviews for Not a father|
| coranajade chapter 8 . 9/12
aww Loved this! I am going to see if you did a sequel. I did like the "kidnapping" so he could sleep.
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/22
I know this is 7 years old, but I just wanted to say I never re-read the same stories or books because I find them boring the second time.
I've read this fic three times and enjoyed it each one. Thank you.
| equine 14 chapter 1 . 7/26
Oh, wow, I want to cry just like obi! This is so good, so heartbreakingly true, and beautifully written to show how bitter qui gon must have felt after xantos's betrayal. Thank you!
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/6
Lemme see If I got this right: He always wanted to be a Jedi Knight but he needs a master Master Qui Gon his Master refused him believed him to turn like his old Palawan he was devastated all he wanted was to be accepted Bandoleer Xanatos Qui Gon called him Palawan in the mines his heart fluttered almost did not believe it to be true it was all he ever wanted gave him a river stone for his birthday not allowed possessions but kept this close to his heart keep it safe it was just a rock but to him it was the world
| child of Jon snow chapter 8 . 3/5
that was wow
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/26
"What a great name for a boy."
"It's a girl."
"What a horrible name for a girl."
I loved this part xD
| AEY chapter 8 . 8/16/2015
I had to admit, you got me with Obi-Wan's dream because I KNEW it had to be referring to the most common dream that deals with Qui-Gon...and then I find out that not only was I wrong but it was about Obi-Wan instead! So bravo for the surprise on that. BTW, thank you for not doing what I thought you were hinting to do to Obi-Wan. The ending made me happy.
| XandyNZ chapter 8 . 5/22/2015
Oblivious!abuse!Qui-Gon makes me sad... But I'm glad that he made up with Obi-Wan in the end... And in the meantime, puppy piles, and embarrassing photos, so cute! :D
| Stormcutter684 chapter 8 . 12/22/2014
Oh my gosh beautiful story! I love the ending, with Obi and Qui's little banter about the photo, and I love the part where the Queen dragged Obi over to the other Princes and Princess'. It was very funny lol!
Beautiful story, love the ending, love love love it. Amazing job!
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/15/2014
This was a cute story. Loved the characterization and adored the royal family. Obi-wan ending up taking a nap with all the other children was perfect! Great job! :)
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/5/2014
Good story, loved the ending :) thanks for sharing
| QueenYoda chapter 8 . 6/19/2014
This was heartbreaking, heartwarming, cute, cutting and excellently done!
| frznlights chapter 4 . 4/12/2014
ouch. the abruptness and the simplicity in which so much was delivered in one word was brilliant - thanks so much again for writing this! I don't even know how many times I've read this story XD
| Elsa-Ranger chapter 8 . 3/17/2013
I just finished rereading this story and I love it even more this time than last time! Your an amazing writer
| xX Feathered Xx chapter 8 . 10/1/2012
Aww.. That was just. Awww...
Wonderful story you have here.
Now I'm just smiling like a fool because, awww...