|Reviews for Not a father|
| Elsa-Ranger chapter 8 . 3/17/2013
I just finished rereading this story and I love it even more this time than last time! Your an amazing writer
| xX Feathered Xx chapter 8 . 10/1/2012
Aww.. That was just. Awww...
Wonderful story you have here.
Now I'm just smiling like a fool because, awww...
| kalujinn chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
I find I rather liked stern!Qui. Very well done! I enjoyed Xanatos' use of the oven mitt - that made me LOL! And Obi-Wan's reaction changing when he realizes his namesake is a girl. Very cute! Wish someone could photomanip that pic you were describing. It would be adorable.
I did find myself being thrown out of the story a couple of times when there were changes in tense. Also, as a point of reference, kings and queens "reign" and you "rein" in a horse, or your temper.
All in all, a very enjoyable read and I'm going to browse your other offerings. Thanks for sharing this with us!
| Above Water chapter 8 . 11/8/2011
Good work! ;)
| Siri Kenobi95 chapter 8 . 9/12/2011
Very good fanfiction. I enjoyed how you wrote Qui-Gon- how he struggled with the betrayal of Xanatos and how it affected his relationship with Obi-Wan. I also loved how you wrote Obi-Wan; he seemed very in character like how selfless he was and his troubles with self esteem. Oh, and I appreciated how you showed some happy flashbacks between Qui-Gon and Xanatos; those aren't very common so I was glad to see it.
| Anakin-Jason-Skywalker-Kenobi chapter 8 . 8/18/2011
I read this awhile ago and I had to read it again! Still as good as the first time! ;D
I wouldn't mind reading another one! :)
| Maen41 chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Good so far.
| Aikoss chapter 8 . 9/28/2010
I read it, I cried, I luv it! All was perfect, lovely perfect. cookies to you!
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 8 . 7/8/2010
| CosmicEssence chapter 8 . 6/29/2010
good dose of the hurt/comfort stuff...that bed scene and Obi-wan's explanation of how he got there is just adorable. I think this one works very well in Qui-Gon's pov and you covered all the holes up so we didnt really need any Obi-Wan views. I am a little confused over two parts though...1) Where did the pain come from if it wasnt the shattered bond?
2)This sentence "If Obi-Wan thought his cruel treatments were considered normal… gods, he doesn't know how the consequences could play out. The idea scared him." I dont understand what was meant by the second half of this sentence...'he doesnt know how the consequences could play out'...sorry maybe i'm missing something obvious but who doesnt know and about what? what consequences?
Your OCS were a charm and Qui-Gon was brilliantly done, his conflict and acceptance and breaking and then mending things. Noda was also good. I had a feeling the baby would be named after the boy, of course the girl twist makes that really funny :p About the dream, it didnt make a whole lot of sense as to why it upset Obi-Wan so much (i mean yeah he's seeing his death but he seemed more concerned over Qui-Gon's reaction than anything).
Overall though i did really like this one; interactions, interplay, humor and angst abound were all very good.
| Jan-AQ chapter 8 . 4/10/2010
Loved it! Great story!
| RoMythe chapter 8 . 3/24/2010
Haha, love it! Especially the last chap! Hehe, I can already see that photo..
| Rosabell chapter 8 . 1/19/2010
I love this fic! The photo was adorable! Thanks for writing this!
| Curtis Zidane Ziraa chapter 8 . 11/24/2009
Hey, I liked Egrin's name. You know how most OCs tend to get American names when canon names are foreign ones, or based on them. It's a pet peeve. So it's good! I LOVED this fic. Actually I like both your Star Wars fics.
I remember first coming to this site to read Digimon, when the anime section was tiny, back in oh, 2001 or '02 and there were so few selections to choose from. And yes, I remember only double digits as well. Heck, the Bleach and Naruto animes didn't even exist yet! Nearly all the good authors have left now, with no time to update any more. Or actually finished their stories. And many of them simply gave up on the site because of all the irritating people on it, and just got so frustrated with the management of plagerism, spamming, false alerts from hateful people wanting to shut down the authors entire status just because they didn't like some of the content of their stories (which sadly, frequently worked, it was awful, those mean people constantly got away with it too).
I've gotten back into Star Wars again, obviously. I like the ideas you have! I no longer have much urge to write (and I really should finish the fics I started... some from way back in '03 I believe.) But then, I've always been much more of a reader than a writer.
Me and my tangents. I love both this and Imbalance, and I hope to see more Star Wars from you! And if not, well, hey, all things must come to an end.
| Orodruin chapter 8 . 10/31/2009
This was a cute story! (In a sad, kicked puppy sort of way.) I liked Qui-Gon's transformation from forcefully detached to the softer relationship he's starting. Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon seem to have a very unique relationship, and I'm not quite sure I can accurately describe it, even to myself, without at least attempting to write it to death, first... but I like the way it turned out here. ;) If that made no sense, I blame it on staying up too late reading.