|Reviews for The Telling of, Wings of Affection|
| puma1sunfire chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Nice I liked it
| Mystic Foxdragon chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
This fic wasn't bad. It was cute and fluffy. Van and Hitomi is one of my favorite couples as well. I wish it was longer.
Van's last name is actually spelled Fanel. Even though it didn't bug me that much when I read it other people might be irked by that particular misspelling. Bottom line, it was good fic, but the spelling and other mistakes kept this from its' full potential. Just have a beta reader next time. _
Other than that this fic was full of WAFF. It made me smile.
| Darkia chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
I'm not trying to bash but... whose point of view is it? When you make a writer's note you should always make sure that you do something that makes it different from the rest of the story like a ... or a break line that's provided at the document page when you click on the document to edit it. If you're going to write a fanfic... LEARN THE PROPER SPELLING OF THE NAMES! U_U Van's name is spelled Fannel not FLANNEL! Google it if you have to. I suggest getting a beta.