|Reviews for Son Of The Kyuubi|
| syia wolf chapter 17 . 3/5
No! Narto save ur sister and hanata you will have narto
| ranneal chapter 17 . 11/16/2012
I loved the interaction between Naruto and Hinata here...you did get them back together and in action. I did like the way they worked their way through the little problem that they had. I just can't believe that this good story is over and they never got to first base in their romance. I wish you could finish this very wonderful story about these two wonderful characters. You are a talented writer...and I will watch to see if you update again...you could even do a time skip to where the manga is today...and continue in the Great Ninja War that is going on:-) Thanks for writing.
| ranneal chapter 16 . 11/16/2012
Hmmmm...I do think that you have lost the focus now on Hinata and Naruto and their romance. It has been hardly mentioned at all for the last couple of chapters. And I thought that the focus on those two characters was what made the story soooo special. Now it seems that the story is so complicated that even Naruto has no time for Hinata...what happened? On to the last chapter and see if you get back to them.
| ranneal chapter 15 . 11/16/2012
I think that your story has many twists and turns and is sure fun to read. The Hinata/Naruto aspect of the story has started to take a back seat to the other characters and adventures...and I hope that you don't forget about it. To me that is the reason that NaruHina stories are special...they have a story...but focus on Naruto and Hinata...not other...side characters that push NaruHina into being background characters...such as the demon girl...Hinata is terribly wounded and Naruto is barely concerned with her here...as he worries about the demon girl...the plot gets complicated.
| ranneal chapter 14 . 11/16/2012
This was a VERY cool chapter! A good mix of fighting, Naruto/Hinata moments...and even some funny situations...including when Hinata was getting worked on and Naruto walked up. Sasuke doesn't know what to think of Hinata...just like in the manga...she only has eyes for Naruto...neat chapter.
| ranneal chapter 13 . 11/16/2012
They are on a MISSION...good chapter. Once again you do such a good job with the Naruto and Hinata relationship. Especially the sweet time with Hinata telling Naruto about the Fire Lillies...cool! Naruto finds great weapons at Ten Ten's shop...nice idea.
| ranneal chapter 12 . 11/16/2012
Now the teams make more sense...I like the four-person team idea. I actually like this kind of chapter a lot...just the two great characters getting to know each other better and their relationship moves on...NaruHina moments:) I like the teams now.
| ranneal chapter 11 . 11/16/2012
I guess, I really didn't understand the team setup and didn't see a reason that you gave to explain why Hinata and Naruto didn't get on the same team. It is your call...but they do seem to work well together and I can't see the rationale for Hinata on team 7. Oh, well...I will wait to see:)
Great chapter...soo much action and loads of fighting...wow!Hinata is cool in your story. Naruto and she are both serious ninja...who fight and don't pull punches. I like the way you show them in this chapter too. Hinata isn't timid or fearful...she just defends her man:-)
| ranneal chapter 10 . 11/15/2012
Wow! This was NOT expected. Good chapter and amazing the way Hinata went after them...I hope she has support... or backup. Fun story.
| ranneal chapter 9 . 11/15/2012
Good chapter...funny at times and just enough of your changes and new twists that it turned out very differently than the manga. I love how you depict the characters. Still a few grammar and spelling errors but they are slight and easy to read around:)
| ranneal chapter 8 . 11/15/2012
Great action and some unexpected twists. This was very cool. I like the idea that the Ninja was Hinata's mother. Hinata crushed Mizuki...and Naruto is strong here.
| ranneal chapter 7 . 11/15/2012
Eventhough this is a story that is told many times...you did a good job and presented it in your creative way. The ending was sad since Hinata couldn't bring herself to say anything...that is her problem in the manga, also. In your story at least she is developing a relationship with Naruto. Good job.
| ranneal chapter 6 . 11/15/2012
I loved this chapter...it was kind of sad to begin with when Naruto just turned away from Hinata and went to the date with Sakura...but that was really his mindset in the Naruto manga at that time. I do like how it ended up and that you are not moving them quickly to a romance here. They hardly know each other at this point...although Naruto already knows that Hinata is great.
| ranneal chapter 5 . 11/15/2012
Loved the chapter...by the way, it wasn't to long. The description of Hinata and Naruto training together...and the help she gave him was excellent. Also, the way things took place at the academy were cool...Naruto wants to sit with Hinata and is willing to fight for it:)
| ranneal chapter 4 . 11/15/2012
You really covered a lot in this chapter. I liked the fact that Hinata and Naruto are training and she was able to get Naruto to bring up chakra control...she also survived the questioning of her father. Nice job.