Reviews for Light and Dark The Adventures of Dark Yagami
Jerksue Trollbitch chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Ohhhhhhhh myyyyy gooooooood

this is


just beautiful


the watarimobile

But it wasn't the lottery. It was... DEATH


instruct me in the ways of the troll


also, call me grossly sentimental, but


I teared up a little at the ending

you managed to actually wrap it up in a way that made an iota of sense

Fuck My Immortal, this is the greatest troll fic ever made
Storm Rhiannon chapter 45 . 10/6/2011
My mind is full of fuck... This was truly amazing.
Sarahmint chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
This is hilarious! So bad, its good.
gddmnt chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
There is no Mona Lisa church in Paris (that happens to be where the Eiffel Tower is, if you were unsure).

The Thames does not run through France, perhaps you're thinking of the Seine? The Thames is in England.

On the subject of England, there is no tunnel to there.

The infamous red light district I assume you're talking about is in Amsterdamn. But, hey, there are ones in Paris, too, so I can give you that much.

I'm 99.7% sure this is a troll fic but, please, keep your geography straight :C
Seihana chapter 16 . 8/21/2011
Like if youve ever jumped in front of a bus and the bus was being driven by satan and there was a dead frog on the front and fire instead of a windscreen - thats how scary it was.

No, that's never happened to me. But I can imagine it wouldn't be pleasant.
T'W'I'S'T'E'D chapter 12 . 8/21/2011
"WTF?" Dark exploding jumping over the walls and smashing some science.


I would complain about a lot, but this story is too damn funny. Plus, I'm playing the drinking game with mountain dew. So by now I have about three cans in me and I'm too hysterical. This is hilarious.
BakaFireKitsuneSama chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
What. the. actual. fuck.

Sara Go1d chapter 18 . 8/8/2011
"Here he had computers and lasers and a nuclear and an xbox 360." Classic case of arson, murder, and jaywalking.


Light was standing a foot behind L. Someone threw a nife at L but missed.

"F-CK! MY PLAN IS RUINED!" light shooted as loud as he can and ran away.

Hahahahaha! *rotflmao*


Haha! Traffic was bad on the highway to hell! That seems like it'd make SO much sense!


And what was with the "take that, TV Tropes!" thing?
Sara Go1d chapter 17 . 8/8/2011
Dude, sorry to burst your bubble, but Soichiro died... Sayu not badass anymore? TTTT
Sara Go1d chapter 16 . 8/8/2011
brazil dancing...

Just-just... wow...

And you just spoiled...a part of the telling everyone that you wouldn't kill Sayu...
Sara Go1d chapter 15 . 8/8/2011
This is getting worse and worse as I read on. But it's a good kinda worse, it makes it funnier, like My Immortal.
Sara Go1d chapter 12 . 8/8/2011
Dark had no problem having sex with Sayu, so why should he have issues with Night?


Ya know what's easier and less painful than a tattoo? Writing on skin with a sharpie. It's actually easier to get off than a wet-erase marker... So much for permanence...
FilinoFang chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
Crap, this is one of the best trollfics I ever read. I think your tied with My Immortal. Congratulations my friend, for you have made me laugh my freakin guts out when Mello was trying to "buddy" up with Dark. This IS a trollfic, righttt?
Sara Go1d chapter 11 . 8/6/2011
So we've all read mild porn several times by now... And I'm sure it's a good thing that nobody licked Near in this story. But he's got fangirls that would probably be delighted to lick him in their stories... /
Sara Go1d chapter 10 . 8/5/2011
"Whatez was thát?" they all assed in French?

I shall take offense on behalf of the French people: The French are not all asses, just like not all Americans are idiots. Yes, I'm sure that some French people are complete and utter assholes, but not all. And please, for the love of all that is good, QUIT BUTCHERING THE LANGUAGE!
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