|Reviews for Date|
| crystalwolfberri chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
ah, I was wondering why Klavier said "also". hehe, I see.
too cute. Snackooed, ahaha. (3
| pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
| madscientists chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Wright more! Oops. I spelt "write" wrong. Write more! It's amazing!
| KurukiXV chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
This one-shot was great. Favurite!
| cherryblossom518 chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
really cute :3
| MonochromeSelene chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
"Wunderbar" Like "Wonderbar"!
*Sigh* at least you're not putting that much of a "German-over-dose."
OK, here we go.
Sorry for being a meanie, but..
Klavier seems a little...OOC(out of character)
I don't think he'd ask Ema straight out "Go on a date with me!"
Maybe a little more subtleness would do it.
A little grammar mistakes, but you can use Word doc for that.
I don't think he'd be that persistant - well, at least, not to the point of being threatened by security for harassesing (suck at spelling) a detective.
Whoo..this is getting long.
Space out your paragraphs! They're too chunky! (for my eyes)
Oh! So it's unedited!
ROFL I COMPLETELY FORGOT SORRY!
Are you quoting Turnabout Corner? "(insert something here, forgot the quote) I wouldn't want to spill something on that pretty face of yours.."
Looked up fop in the dictionary? I didn't. LOL, I thought it was another word that Ema made up.
Hm...well, this could be believable if you thought Ema and Klavier as chibis (the short, slightly chubby, cute little versions of the actual character).
Aww! (I just imagined them as chibis!)
OK, sorry for the long review.
I know almost everyone says this but..
Update soon 'kay?
| princessphilomena chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
I loved how it was short and funny - I love Ema's last line :)
I'm looking forward to seeing more from you!
| demonprosecutor chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Yey for Klema! Loving this story - keep up the great work! :D
| Kimi chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Aw, that was good for something unedited! Cute, too. I liked how it was short, and sweet and to the point. Plus, the use of German that might've been used by a native was a nice touch, too.
And ha, Klavier finally managed to get what he wanted with some bribery. Thumbs up for Klavier!
Keep up the good work (I've read your other one-shots, too!)
| Holly Unending chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
I was laughing throughout this whole story! "Well, at least she had called his face pretty." and "What in the world was a glimmerous fop, anyway?" So cute and so believable.