Reviews for Branded Love
master.clef11 chapter 17 . 6/15/2009
awesomeness, but it was kind of expected that the bad guy would get them and they would destroy them. maybe i just read a lot of those stories. any way cant wait for the next one and ill look at your joint one when i get a chance
EmblemDuelist chapter 17 . 6/2/2009
Another great chapter! It's nice to know that Ryura's plans have been foiled. See you next chapter!
Subsonic chapter 17 . 5/31/2009
Awesome story, I'm hooked now! Really wished it was an IkexOC fic though. I haven't even read one yet. I don't think they are any on the site. Anyway awesome story!

~Holy Star
iChocoLove chapter 17 . 5/30/2009
I've completely reread your fic. :'D It makes a lot more sense now that I know the characters. XD Yea.

D: Was the illusion speaking the truth? Was it? -strangles-

._. Yea.

Moving on.

I checked out the fic you did with FE Girl and I liked it (a lot)! :'D Thought I'd let you know. XD

Update soon!
Blaperile chapter 17 . 5/30/2009
Good job like always.

Also the most emotional moment for me was with that ghost of Hana and Li-en's mother, you can write those things very good!

I'll have a look at that fanfic you did with FE Girl 1. :)
ShadowGreymon chapter 17 . 5/28/2009
"I fight for my friends" Ike's classic quote lol
psykomaker.exe chapter 17 . 5/28/2009
Heyya! Long time no review! I miss !

Anyway, to the story! It's getting nicely done, although I can still spot some spelling errors... And now the Blood Vial is out of the story,(or not?) why the siblings is wanted? Why? xD
jordan114725 chapter 17 . 5/27/2009
Thank you for the update alert. I really appreciate it.

I really liked this chapter, it is definitely one of your better ones. The scenes with the ghosts were creative; I did not expect them to be traps.

Your characters are done well in this chapter. The conversation between Hana, Li-en and their "mother" was particularly well done. It provided nice backstory, and the emotions were portayed perfectly

Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days looks good, but I have to wait for an english version before playing.

I will be sure to read the joint fanfic; thanks for the update!
Moonlight-Zelda chapter 17 . 5/27/2009
Definitely a good chapter. _
Meta Zangetsu chapter 17 . 5/27/2009
you had to do it you just had to make the brawl pun didnt you
master.clef11 chapter 16 . 5/14/2009
finally its up *Reads really quick* what its over. I read way to quick. Good luck on your tests and cant wait for the next one.
jordan114725 chapter 16 . 5/11/2009
Thanks for sending me the notice; i just read through your fic. I really like the amount of detail you put in each character. I really feel like i get to know your 2 OC's and I like how they are experiencing emotional struggles.

I love/hate how you end alot of the chapters in a cliffhanger. It makes me want to read the next one, but makes me kinda mad. - dont pay attention to that

I can't wait until you Kingdom Hearts story. I will be sure to read that

EmblemDuelist chapter 16 . 5/11/2009
Another nice chapter! Poor Izuka. He got torched. Oh well. He deserved it.

Now, what will happen next chapter? I'll be waiting!
Blaperile chapter 16 . 5/11/2009

Nice like always!

Good written, it really looks like it's from a game or movie or something like that.

There still were some mistakes, but I don't care about that. Everything is still easy to understand.

I hope you keep going like this,

Meta Zangetsu chapter 16 . 5/10/2009
epic what battes are in store for our heros find out next time on Dragonball Z
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