Reviews for Atlas Shrugs
ripper34 chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
Good story
SmacksKiller chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
Very nice. There isn't a lot of John-Derek friendships fics out there, which is a shame because after 'Goodbye To All That' I feel they really clicked together as a team. I hope you make more of them.
Embry chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
LOVE! theres nothing else i can say!
tabitha5 chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Good story :) Will there be more?
Fortex chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Your portrayal of the characters sounds spot on. And their interaction works really well. I hope the series confronts the issue of John's burden as honestly as you did here.
Dre4mwe4ver chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Especially liked the last line

"There was never really any choice at all"

because it kinda reflects on one major theme of Terminator "No Fate but what we make" because of how some things you can change, yet here in your story, one cannot deny the facts that some things must happen, no matter what.

Which makes me wonder if Skynet can ever really be stopped.

Really deep and thought provoking story. Write on.
JovialShogun chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Great job... I think that would do more for john than any shrink could.
Sensue chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
A really good read. Insightful and thought provoking.

Plus, really love the uncle/nephew bond of Derek and John. He might not be his father, but he loves him all the same. He is the 'father-figure'.

The last two lines are especially good.

"John can’t lay it down. And Derek can’t let John down.

There was never really any choice at all."
crazylikeafox chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
this is beautiful. i love derek and john stories and i hope you write more. keep up the great work!