Reviews for Mischievous
Aye Chihuahua chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Cute, if a little OOC. I liked it. I noticed a few sentences without punctuation at the end, so that's something to fix. It's not hard to fix of course, and nothing big, just re-read it a few times before you post to make sure. Happy writing! :D

ROCK ON pEaCe oUt

-Elise
Tina101 chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
That was an adorable Alice/Jasper moment. Great job!

~Tina101
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