Reviews for Micro Fissures
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Aw! That's so sweet! I love it!
Eternal Density chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
aw cute :D that was great.
kkj chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Lovely story. It made me laugh, smile, and say 'oh'. I particularly liked the part where Rodney's body shook just before he kissed Jennifer. The kiss was quite well written as well. Nicely done!
sashachild chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
There were some things I liked and some things I didn't. Some of the interaction was nice, but I really can't picture Rodney being so dismissive about Elizabeth, or taking the attitude, "things are different, but I really don't mind." It was clear in the episode that Rodney was haunted by his role in the nanite thing, so for him to be so casual about it doesn't ring true with me. I also thought he was way too confident (despite your nice detail that he was shaking slightly).

There's definitely some nice banter here, but I had problems with Rodney's characterization throughout.

I hope this was helpful.
Ilerya82 chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Very cute! Ultimate fluff that's good for any McKeller heart!

I bet Rodney would gloat if he caught Jennifer leaning in for a kiss and stopping herself before anything started, it's just so... well, so Rodney! Can't help but love that geeky Adonis!

Thanks for a cute read!