|Reviews for Sleep|
| Reader1 chapter 1 . 1/12
THAT WAS AWESOME!
U should become a professional writer (if that exists). This was detailed and precise
| Angel kiss chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
I LOVE this! I spent ages reading it but it was worth it! Good job!:) it was awesome story! Thanks a lot :) :) :)
| Some Kid chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
That was a great story! It was cute and awesome! Keep writing!
| LunaLola chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Oh so fluffy! _
| JenniCDS chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Oh my god this is adorable
I loved it!
| BrinaCatherwood chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
I really liked the story, but I had trouble reading most of it because, I guess you were typing too quickly or just didnt edit but the words were mixed up in areas and it switched back in forth with past, present, and future tense a lot. Other than that I liked it.
| LadyBowie1947 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
First, might I suggest a beta for grammar and punctuation?
Other than that making it a bit difficult to flow through, it was a great read. Normally, I don't finish fics that are hard to flow through, but the idea and the fluff demanded I finish. The overall concept was adorable and Ciel is just so cute so great job there!
| Tik-Tok-Sky chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
That was so incredibly cute!
Good fic I really liked it!
| Carrie2sky chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Lovely story! I would love to see more, but I don't know if you have plans for that.
You write your character very well! Ciel and Sebastian were very IC, and I love Sebastian taking care of Ciel when he can't take care of himself, or rather doesn't want to, or anyone else. But Sebastian always gets his way, LOL!
| belarus bitch chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
holy crap. that was frekin amazing. please tell me how you write such good stories. it was 2 in the moring and i was about to collapse but i read the whole thing becuase it was so amazing. please please please please please write more. i love you 3
| English is not my 1st language chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
...so forgive any mistakes!
You're the best writer. EVER.
I would LOVE to see it as a series or, if you'd rather, a unrelated Kuroshitsuji long fic.
Your portray of the characters did, for me, far better than the Season 2, if we compare it with the original manga. I've yet to see a fic where we can find both, a dark, sarcastic and pratical - yet fairly tender and truly caring - Sebastian and the confuse and love-craving Ciel - never once forgeting his adult, devilsh side. This, and a typical Kuroshitsuji plot: Ciel's revenge and Sebastian's duties as his butler.
I love how Sebastian seems confident all the way, but you know SOMETHING is going on inside his mind - little shocks and behaviours that show he cares a lot more about Ciel (mind, body and soul) than he lets on. He doesn't get humans, but will do his best for Ciel's sake, even going a lot further than any butler - demon or not.
On the other hand, I love how Ciel refuses to show his weak side even to Sebastian, but will still obey him and relax under his protection. He follows his butlers orders when he is the most fragile! Now, that's surely trusting. But why is it? He just need someone who is in fact stronger than him to show him he's alright or is a child-parent feel? Or, as some could just as easily claim, he is in love?
Same goes for Sebastian. What DOES he thinks about Ciel? If he is just a tasty soul, why care SO MUCH about him? But can a demon like him like humans, even the slightiest?
And underlaying quietly under the fic's surface, there's the revenge. Will Ciel be happy if he gets it? Is he as cold as he wants? WHY did it all hapenned in first place?
These are just a few reasons why I love Kuroshitsuji and you managed to get the dark-yet-sweet feel of the manga so well that I can't help but write a lenghty review highlighting some of these points.
And I tried, but COULDN'T find ANYTHING I would change. PERFECT might as well describe this fic. It is one hell of a fic, afterall. lol
| Kuro Shi no Ikari chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
You know, when I read the last part, I couldnt stop a smile?
You did a great job!
| YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
This story is great! I hope u keep writing. Oh, and update real soon I'm soooo looking forward to it. Remember SOON.
| tillyanimegirl chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Aww! This story was so cute! I think you should write more! Please! ;_;
| Litschi chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Oh my that was soo Cute and God! Just AWSOME! _
I LOVE it! PLEASE make more chapies, please! It's to good to be only a one shot!
*Adding to my Favslist
This definitly must go to my Favslist, it would be a shame to left it out!
Hopefully you continue!
Sebastian and Ciel soo Cute _