Reviews for Broken Worlds, Fractured Fairytales
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31
Wow this was heartbreaking. Great story
Ditte3 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
It's so sad.
epalladino chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
This was so sad, but very well written. Thanks, Beth
Trivette Lover Heather chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Wonderful writing. Simply wonderful.
Kariesue chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
incredible, but how sad! Good thing it's only a story!
tearbos chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Wow, that was really, really sad. The part where Alan was thinking Don might be better off dead was heartbreaking.
Mel J1701 chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Excellent story. I loved the brooding darkness of Alan's thoughts, especially his guilt over neglecting Don as a child then again as an adult because Charlie was the easiest to deal with of the two. The portrayal of all Don had lost was wonderfully written.

As always, I look forward to seeing what you have up your sleeves next!
pendragoness chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Aw...I practically cried when I read this...A well-written story about a heartbreaking scenario...

One minor correction: (near the beginning)...instead of "faithful August day", it should probably read "fateful August day".

Excellent job!

luvnumb3rs chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Wish there was more good work
newgal chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
VEry emotional piece. Good job.