|Reviews for The Sweet & Sour & Bitter|
| laugherXD chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
| Vongola Princessa chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Found a mistake, but it's still good :)
'...Mikan said as she THRE herself to bed again.'
Do you mean 'threw'?
| Miss Sunshinee chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Interesting, please update soon. :)
| cj-the-fool chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
plzzz update asap
| Love Crazed Moron chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Are you sure the rating K is really appropriate for your story? Isnt it more on the T side?
Anywways, that was just my opinion...
I cant wait to find out what happens in chapter 3 :)
| kara'mel'-chan chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
Awwwww... Natsume- kuuuuuun! So cute! He's all nice and eeee! The 'it' part was quite unusual. xD Anyhow, keep it up.
| Vongola Princessa chapter 2 . 3/15/2009
O! Wonder what she sees? Natsume and a slut having sex? Baka Natsume for bringing a slut home! ;/
| QueenPrincess chapter 2 . 2/21/2009
YAY! I want this story to continue...how were the exams?
| ayumistar00 chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
nice story hope u update soon
| Miss Dorks chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
Do not tell me Natsume is making love with some other girl. O_O;
Keep updating, the story is interesting.
| thundra18 chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
it's an interesting one!
| Strawberriesn'Flames11 chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
update soon desu~! sANkyuu! nice story By the way!
| jubelle chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
what did she saw?
| incompetent dabbler chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
...ew in so many ways. Natsume's become a perverted player! Well he always is so :P You might want to fix your grammar. But other than that great job and good luck!
Luna Rei Harmony
| Akirina chapter 2 . 12/31/2008
You can try POV from both sides, explain why natsume's childhood friend would want him to 't write in Twilight version. At least see how creative you can get.