Reviews for The Sweet & Sour & Bitter
laugherXD chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
Vongola Princessa chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Found a mistake, but it's still good :)

'...Mikan said as she THRE herself to bed again.'

Do you mean 'threw'?
Miss Sunshinee chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Interesting, please update soon. :)
cj-the-fool chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
plzzz update asap
Love Crazed Moron chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Are you sure the rating K is really appropriate for your story? Isnt it more on the T side?

Anywways, that was just my opinion...

I cant wait to find out what happens in chapter 3 :)
kara'mel'-chan chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
Awwwww... Natsume- kuuuuuun! So cute! He's all nice and eeee! The 'it' part was quite unusual. xD Anyhow, keep it up.


Vongola Princessa chapter 2 . 3/15/2009
O! Wonder what she sees? Natsume and a slut having sex? Baka Natsume for bringing a slut home! ;/
QueenPrincess chapter 2 . 2/21/2009
YAY! I want this story to were the exams?
ayumistar00 chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
nice story hope u update soon
Miss Dorks chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
Do not tell me Natsume is making love with some other girl. O_O;

Keep updating, the story is interesting.
thundra18 chapter 2 . 1/11/2009

it's an interesting one!

lovin' it!


update soon!
Strawberriesn'Flames11 chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
update soon desu~! sANkyuu! nice story By the way!
jubelle chapter 2 . 1/2/2009

what did she saw?
incompetent dabbler chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
...ew in so many ways. Natsume's become a perverted player! Well he always is so :P You might want to fix your grammar. But other than that great job and good luck!


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Akirina chapter 2 . 12/31/2008
You can try POV from both sides, explain why natsume's childhood friend would want him to 't write in Twilight version. At least see how creative you can get.
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