Reviews for Our Moments
Orangefrog chapter 17 . 6/6/2014
Great story so far! Hope you update it someday!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 17 . 3/16/2013
Noooo you can't stop here! I know your life is probably mental and you have said you will finish but it has been a looong while now. I would really love for you to post even unfinished chapters and notes. Though I guess at least we have got to the point of them being together and out in the open.
Adored this fantastic long chapter. Love your writing
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 16 . 3/16/2013
Hey, did you find a beta? Cause usually I would say the grammar and spelling etc side of your story is pretty great, in addition to the story itself being great! You had one little slip in this chapter; diluted when you meant delusional I think!
Aw I love their flirting! Even if it was rude to Lexi! Lol. And I love the teasing friends
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 15 . 3/16/2013
I adore your writing. I hope there is more of it to read :). This chapter was so simple but strong and great
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 14 . 3/16/2013
Aw this was probably the most impressive chapter yet. Beautifully written and so moving. You put humour and emotion side by side and made a fantastically real chapter. The parts with Lily missing her parents and traditions and the final scenes really moved me.
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 13 . 3/16/2013
Really good conversation and though it was frustrating you created understanding too and a real feeling of sympathy when everything was so rubbish between them
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 12 . 3/16/2013
Love this fic! Though it is moments it is like a brilliant contined fic really!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 11 . 3/16/2013
Aw that was so cute and fun and adorable. I loved the quirky date and the things that went wrong. I liked lily hiding it from her friends that morning but her asking him to keep it secret felt pretty awkward, but I suppose that is fitting.
You did make one mistake that I think you'll want to change...when she went on that date with Kevin you said he ordered strawberry shortcakes and that she was allergic to strawberries which James knew! And in this chapter you had the house elf say strawberry cheesecake was her fave and then she and James ate it!
Also, I'm guessing you're American or a not British nationality so I'll excuse it (and frankly you write brilliantly English most of the time!) but we really rarely get winters where rivers or streams would freeze any more. It used to happen in the 1800s and early 1900s but not in recent times at all. Plus, it would never be cold enough to freeze from Oct to March or April, maybe Dec-Jan at the most we get cold weather and sometimes a bit of snow in Feb and March but not long enough cold spells to have proper freezing like that, even in Scotland. But there are ice skating rinks in many towns so I can imagine Lily learning there. Xxx
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 10 . 3/16/2013
Aww yes yes yes! Yay! Finally! Loved the Sirius Convo and her logic of hiding in the owlery
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 9 . 3/16/2013
Yessssss! Kiss time! Woop! Aww they are so adorable and cute, driving me crazy with their misunderstandings. You write so I feel so close to them.
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 8 . 3/16/2013
Aw this was such a fantastic chapter. It was so long and detailed and you make everything everyone feels so real and relatable
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 7 . 3/16/2013
Aw I love it when people do slug club meetings and yours was no exception. Great ideas and little touches
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 6 . 3/16/2013
Aw so moving and heartbreaking. I really liked their conversations
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 5 . 3/16/2013
Ah idiots who try to correct you bug me so much! Glad you set them straight and you are most definitely right!
Loved this chapter, you created such an intense, charged moment, could really feel the connection and the heat!
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 4 . 3/16/2013
Your chapters are amaing. So long and detailed and generally delicious! The characters feel so real and right to me
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