Reviews for House Unity
potterhead0427 chapter 16 . 7h
This story could be written so much better. Draco is way OOC and he would never be that romantic. There is no buildup to the proposal itself and everything moves too fast. The storyline is also confusing because it was previously stated that Ginny was going to marry on Christmas but now it’s New Years.
Kenna chapter 35 . 6/21
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Kenna chapter 23 . 6/21
Guest chapter 35 . 6/13

Love it tho
Efam chapter 22 . 6/10
I know that readers will have complained enough for you to bring back Fred, but he wouldn't be anywhere without George, and so he wouldn't be late. If he wasn't with George, he'd be dead.
Efam chapter 21 . 6/10
The dress was periwinkle blue.
Efam chapter 8 . 6/10
Blaise, easily.
Efam chapter 29 . 6/11
I thought Ginny and Blaise's wedding was on Christmas? Might be wrong though.
Efam chapter 27 . 6/11
*Is exasperated*
Efam chapter 25 . 6/10
You know how bad "he couldn't love her anymore" sounds? It could be interpreted as he didn't love her anymore, not that Blaise loves Ginny so much that he couldn't love her anymore than he already did.
Efam chapter 24 . 6/10
I KNEW IT! My first guess when she was pale and tired was that she was pregnant. In fact, I almost left it in a review.
Kashish Chaurasia chapter 26 . 6/7
Hey author
I wanted to ask u where does teddy Lupin come in this and are Remus and Tonks dead or are they alive like Dumbledore and Snape in this fanfic
Guest chapter 12 . 6/3
Love it!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/3
I love this it’s amazing please make more fanfiction like this!
Dracenxamethyst chapter 15 . 5/30
Well she's a slut lol.
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