Reviews for Making the Wrong Connection
Jazzola chapter 6 . 2/27/2011
This is a really, really great story! I really like it. Thanks for publishing!

Jazzola :)
jewlz-sheridan chapter 6 . 4/23/2009
WOW, i love this, best A2A story i have ever read, hope you'll put more chapters up soon! x
theHuntgoeson chapter 6 . 1/17/2009
Sorry to see that this fic is now on hiatus - I DO hope not permanent - but thanks very much for giving us another update. So Alex didn't get Gene where she wanted him after all, and it looks as though she's lost her only friend in 2008. But we still don't know what game Doctor Jones is playing, and whether Alex will get back to 1981 to put things right. So please, I hope you see your way to letting us know sometime!
Roxy0800 chapter 6 . 1/14/2009
Great chapter,

Hasn't anyone taught him not to read other peoples diaries?
MissLewis chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Well done on some fantastic writing.

I am thoroughly enjoying reading your story so far and can't wait for the next chapter,

Your style of writing is amazing, you have a superb talent for writing, keep going, you're doing great so far.
theHuntgoeson chapter 5 . 11/15/2008
Horrific to read how the younger Alex went downhill after finding the tape and how she took it out on Evan. The older Alex seems only just to be realising that this mess is all her fault. Fancy that, the teen Alex throwing herself at Gene! As for the cliffie - well, this is M-rated, so I suppose we can guess what happens next, but don't keep us in suspense for too long...

By the way, Alex Price was 8, not 11, in A2A. Hope that doesn't upset your calculations too much.
Gem6 chapter 5 . 11/12/2008
Oh wow...what an amazing chapter!

Am so looking forwards to seeing how you continue this one...I love it!

Gem x
Emm.x chapter 5 . 11/12/2008
What are you doing?

I can't handle cliffhanger...
drakehuntfan chapter 5 . 11/12/2008
Oh my God, this is crazy and great! I am totally confused but loving it! haha!

lol at young Alex trying to cop of with Gene (well, we all would wouldn't we?)

fantastic and , ahem... MORE!

:) KOB
louella chapter 5 . 11/12/2008
More intrigue and an interesting set up for some interesting plot twists. Really keen to find out where this goes.
drakehuntfan chapter 4 . 11/10/2008
ooh! intrigue!

i pray Gene doesn't abandon her!

more please!

:)
Lucida Bright chapter 4 . 11/4/2008
What a great idea - intrigued to see what happens next, so hope you're a quick updater...
theHuntgoeson chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Gene and co still in the force in 2008, apparently no older and with their rough edges knocked off? How intriguing. So is this 2008 real or another of Alex's constructs, are Gene and co real in the real 2008, in 1981, or nowhere? As you've given a few lines from Gene's viewpoint (and he almost recognises Alex) there's a suggesion that he's real in this 2008. And who is this mysterious Doctor Jones, and how and why does he already know Alex? And why does she have no cravings? Because she's never tried heroin in the real 2008? Tell us more...
Gem6 chapter 4 . 11/1/2008
Oh...Excellent stuff!

I love it!

Gem x
louella chapter 4 . 11/1/2008
Intriguing and really unusual story. Intersting to picture Gene and co in 2008. Hope you don't have anything too nasty planned for Alex though. Looking forward to more.
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