|Reviews for A Familiar Sound|
| Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
This poem was a good read and well-written.
I do have suggestions to make, after I caught some small mistakes while reading the poem: in the fourth line, "ever had" should be switched around to "had ever". In the next line down, "it" should be taken out. There's also an "i" that needs to be captialized. In the line "For he had not seen him for many a year", the first "For" might need to be taken out, but the second "for" should be replaced with "in". In the line, "But if he had known of what was to come", the word "But" should be left out from this line. One last word I caught, a spelling mistake, was "vicotry" which should be spelled "victory" instead.
Usually when I review, I tend to make constructive critiques for stories and poems. These are the mistakes I caught the first two times I read through your poem. Otherwise, nice job.
| CersiFinallyGotWhatSheDeserved chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
A great poem fic. Very well written.
| Larner chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Ah, Gandalf and adventures, even very dark ones, ought to always be tied together in the minds of Hobbits. Alas that Bilbo's beloved heir must see what he does in his.