|Reviews for Fresh Steps|
| Binka chapter 21 . 6/21/2016
This story was great! I do think Renee is nuts though, what did she think she'd achieve when both her kids were of age? I'm also quite sad because I don't have an Edward of my own, thank heaven for fiction. I'd love to see a sequel, but I'm a bit scared of reading it in case Renee gets out of prison and goes after Bella and Edward's twins or something equally as horrifying. One thing's for sure, if either of the twins is a girl, she won't be called Renesmee
| Guest chapter 21 . 9/22/2012
I lovr youre story, It is awesome!
| SomebodySaveMe1998 chapter 20 . 10/7/2011
It was a good story but it would have been better if u made the epilogue longer.
| Aly8188 chapter 21 . 9/9/2011
| BellaHatesAlice chapter 3 . 1/28/2011
I dont like Bella being contolled what to do by Rosalie let alone Alice. They ALWAYS tell her what to wear, put make up on her and everything.!it makes me think that they dont actually like how Bella looks. And how is it that Bella is tired and annoyed at Renee because she wanted bella to be something shes not and then you write Rosalie plucking bellas eyebrows, putting on her makeup and throwing out her clothes and going shopping to change her wardrobe and Bella doesnt complain and lets it go? And alice is already demanding to shop. Always typical in stories.
| BellaHatesAlice chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
This looks like a good story. Oh and i love love love the fact that you made bella the oldest twin!
| XlaraC chapter 21 . 1/24/2011
I really enjoyed this story, but I'm unsure whether or not I'll be reading the sequel. I'll probably get around to it eventually.
| loveit33 chapter 19 . 7/5/2010
EVIL RENEE why did she ruin everything! STUPID LAWYER! renee must not love bella and emmet very much! i loved this chapter but hated it as well if you get what i mean
but i want to and will finish it none the less xx
| loveit33 chapter 8 . 7/5/2010
grrrr... JAMES! he ruins EVERYTHING!
| unlovedAngel.x chapter 2 . 2/19/2010
(: Can't wait to read next ch.
| Eternally-Mine chapter 21 . 10/4/2009
aw this was so god i loved it and now its off to get the sequel yay!
| ashley chapter 21 . 7/4/2009
I just wanted to tlet you know that fresh steps was an AMAZING story. It completely made my day. I was looking for a good read for quite some time and I ABSOLUTLEY AND POSITIVELY enjoyed reading Fresh steps. Please continue writing more stories! :]
| Samboroo chapter 4 . 6/30/2009
my brother would hand me a b0x of condoms 2. creepy but funny. he just loves her.
| bite-me-cullen.just-do-it0304 chapter 16 . 6/28/2009
they didnt even say i love you yet? OMG I THOUGHT THEY DID A LONG TIME AGO BEFORE HEY HAD SEX OMG I THOUGHT HE WAS GONNA ASK HER TO MARRY HIM! O WELL GREAT STORY
| bite-me-cullen.just-do-it0304 chapter 14 . 6/28/2009
crazy bitch alert!
i hope they are okay
i loved it