Reviews for Zero |
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![]() ![]() Please update! want more of jake's perspective. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwhh poor jake! i think you shoiuld do one where jake sends a letter to sam and she repies ohh and when sam comes home! that would be kool! |
![]() ![]() oh poor jake! please continue soon its really not that bad... its actualy quite good! UD UD UD UD! soon! ok! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a cool story I love PS maybe you could do another story in Jake's perspective their really good. |
![]() ![]() ya sorry wrong story sorry |
![]() ![]() this is good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Im Chloe... I love your story! Its good, really good...I like how its about Jakes point of view this time...What is gunna happen next? I cant wait! Please update soon i love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Good Good! Wow, that's really powerful stuff! Update! oh and about the flashbacks, I loved them! REALLY AWESOMEFUL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was pretty good! just watch ur grammar, and it's River 'Bend' not river bind ranch. my suggestion is to get yourself a beta, they are extremely helpful when it comes to little details like that. Alyx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it sounds familar to afta4ever because jakesgirl wrote something similar in 1 of her storys. |
![]() ![]() ![]() do you have this posted under something else because i have read this on Fanfiction before and it was the exact same thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw this is good |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG love it! You totally nailed the characters! You could make another from Jake's POV when Sam comes back. i think that would be really cool! |