Reviews for Ashes and Other Such Things
aksdlhfklsd chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
I liked the subtlety of this piece. Too many people go over the top with the fluff when it comes to these two, but you managed to create a nice moment between them while keeping it believable. You also wrote it very well and kept them in character. Great work. (:
Falling Tears of Death chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
I already told you how great this is via email

but i felt the need to publicly say

you ARE my MENTOR

i grovel at your feet

i have some words for you *i know a big role reversal*

Something is coming

like change

like age

like the way you mold your clay family

and whatever it is

explodes just as easily
Tsuki-Dei chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
Hi~

Well, I was looking my friend's Profile (I'm sure you know metáfora...) and I saw this on her favorites, so I decide to read it.

And, I like it. It was that "something" subtle that makes me want more and more and more of this. ItaDei is a very beautiful pairing, but there's not enough people trying to write something good. You're a very skilled writer.

Yay for ItaDei! And Yay for you!

Well, yeah.

Ta ta!~ Have a nice day and smile! :D
metafora89 chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
You wrote this and you didn't tell me anything! XD

I almost fainted when I saw it... But I could control myself long enough to read it :D And I should say: FANTASTIC!

I really love the way you write about characters and the way you picture Itachi... He's so natural. Also Deidara.

It makes the reader suddenly be happy XD

Really. I loved it n.n