Reviews for Ink
Guest chapter 2 . 12/4/2016
Wow...this was a beautiful story
Nuggets chapter 2 . 1/3/2015
Very well done
999 the 9th chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
I really like this story. It's well written and showcases the bond between Mario and Luigi. I like how you demonstrate how out of it Luigi is with the words in the parenthesis. Are you going to continue this or is it already complete?
Luigi's SoulMate chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
Me: Poor Weegee! *hugs Luigi*
Me: Fine, I won't hug you...
Luigi: Okay, thank you.
Me: ...
Luigi: ...
Me: *kisses Luigi* X3
Luigi: 0-0 MMMPPPHHH!
Me: *screams* I KISSED WEEGEE! *skips away happily*
Luigi: I...uh...
Mario: :)
Luigi: :I
Mario: Deal with it...
Luigi: Uhhhhh...*faints*
Mario: Angel!
Me: Yay! It worked! *kisses Luigi*
Mario: -ROFL-
Peach: 0-0
Daisy: 0-0
Me: 0-0
Mario: 0-0
Luigi: *wakes up* 0-0
Everyone: ...
Me, Mario and Peach: *runs away*
Luigi: *gulp*
Daisy: *beats Luigi*
1Thunderfire chapter 2 . 12/6/2009
Why did Bowser lock Luigi up? WHY? I have tears running down my face as I pe this. Luigi...
Samu chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
Very nice and very intense. I loved the emotion you have in here. I also really enjoyed the thoughts in the brackets. They seemed to highlight on the current mood and slight insanity.
JtheChosen1 chapter 2 . 2/2/2009
wow...super intense! will there be more?

excellent work!
DemonicDelicacy chapter 2 . 11/28/2008
This story is amazing. Plz update soon.
Graveshift Spaceship chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
Excellent read. Keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying it.
demonlifehealer chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Oh wow! I was in tears by the end of this! This story is so sad but it's also so well written! Please update soon!
oh my god the regret I have chapter 2 . 11/5/2008
...this story is isnteresting and kind-of well-written, but there are a few problems:

First of all, it's Pigeon, not 'Pidgin'

Second, what the heck is up with all of the putting adjecties inside these '[]'? It's really quite annoying to read. Just pick an adjective and stick with it.

Just some friendly con-crit. Have a nice day.