Reviews for Try, Trial, and Try Again
levinsaxid chapter 1 . 7/13
sweaterweather21 chapter 1 . 7/13
Again, adorable. I liked the idea of spell-engineering as a seventh-year project, and I can totally see James and Lily being total over-achievers about it. The last line was cute, too (and a little cheesy) but it definitely works :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10
So sweet!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
gods, that last sentence is quite possibly the BEST ending I have ever READ.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
Love it!
Ess Tee94 chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
Awww the last line was addddorablee..x
Love the fact that this one shot had an actual plotline(maybe this is the wrong word) as in one would usually say they were on a project
But you actually invented what the project was and not just left it at they were working on charms project
Anyway well done..x
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
That last sentence was too cheesy and cute "I already broke the shield I wanted to" *swoon*
Great job, this was incredible, like a lot of your work.
Mallory chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
omg this was so freaking cute im about to cry omg omg omg omg
ph0shzl chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
the last line was so cheesy. but it was okay ;) MUCH LOVE!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
I think I just died from fluff over exposure. I love it!
caspasta chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
jkaldhfp;ahjkfd;ka SO CUTE
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
That was so adorable. I might cry.
Aurora Darcy chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
That was a lovely ending! Sweetest thing I've ever read anywhere! Love it!
iiruleoverboyz chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
I get shivers reading this
SayCheshire chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Er, I know the point of the oneshot was James and Lily's relationship, but I wish you'd told us what they end up creating, even if James doesn't care. I felt that the spell was more interesting than their relationship in this case.
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