Reviews for Fade to Black
Permanent Rose chapter 23 . 12/24/2008
im reviewing this one cuz i promised to :)
Permanent Rose chapter 22 . 12/24/2008
as i promised, i will review every chapter.

i loved it! It was so perfect-they really make a perfecrt couple
The Duchessina chapter 22 . 12/14/2008
Loved the ending. Sweet wedding scene, and it was just perfect! :)
roxymar chapter 22 . 12/9/2008
totally cute!

loved emette's suggestion! that was pure wonderful-ness!

great job :)
sex wife chapter 22 . 12/9/2008
Another porn chapter! No wonder i liked it so much... .

A great ending! Looking back at this story as a whole, I'm pretty amazed to see how much of a better writer you're becoming in such a short amount of time. [not that you weren't amazing to start with.] I thoroughly enjoyed the wedding. You set up the next story with a professional ease...I hope you update as quickly with the final installment., i hate it when great things come to an end.
sex wife chapter 21 . 12/7/2008
What a way to end it. I'll save my final thoughts for the epilogue.

I liked Paige announcing the engagement...I liked Carlisle's reaction to Alice's vision. I think the third story shall be rather epic...You did a wonderful job of setting it up.
sex wife chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
You're a monster.

I see 20 chapters up and nearly die...

then i find ONE SENTENCE?

World's shortest update?


I will grudgingly admit that i like the quote.

look at the bright side...

you didn't need my help writing this chapter! lol
WhyWasISoDumb chapter 20 . 12/5/2008
Do the volturi kill her?
The Duchessina chapter 20 . 12/5/2008
NO! Arielle cannot be evil! SHE CAN'T! And I love that Seth is using Romeo and Juliet to propose - that is just so sweet! Update soon! (Even though I know I don't have to tell you!)
The Duchessina chapter 19 . 12/5/2008
So sad. But it was very cool to hear from Carlisle's POV. And I love the talks between Seth and Paige.
Permanent Rose chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
another little prologue, i see. even shorter than the one in broken vow...:)

so my computer crashed last night :( carlisle. is. dead. i am so upset *sobs* at least i'll be able to use the computers at school...and my hubby's occasionally...i'm hoping i'll get that new lap top for christmas more than ever now :(

i'm at the public library right now. i needed to return and check out some books, and while i was in here, it dawned on me that i could use the library computers! i might just live here now :)
lovetheL chapter 19 . 12/4/2008


omg..that would just kill Carlisle!


but the Romeo Juliet scene was adorable and i am SO glad Edward, Carlisle, and the rest of them are pleased. ]


sex wife chapter 19 . 12/4/2008
glad my blah-ish writing made it into your chapter.

LOVED the proposal. I knew you'd get there witha lil nudge in the right direction. I liked how you ended it, too. Very nice. Keeping in good form with the cliffie trend, i see. For someone suffering severe writer's block, you made an awesome chapter! Loved Jake's line...i loled at Edward. SO him.
Tinithor chapter 15 . 12/4/2008
Ok i know this is kinda messed up of me to think, but i'm glad you took this path to make her a vampire. I was hoping you would do something like this. Guess i just love everyone becoming vampires, ah well.
roxymar chapter 19 . 12/4/2008
ending with another cliffy

wow, i love seth ( i think he uses edward as a role model) and the whole romeo and juielt was probably edwards idea.

cant wait for the wedding...hopfully mommy would be there (mom is still not in good grases with me...she shouldn't have left!)

oh, well, please continue... :)
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