Reviews for The Halloween Fair
Ziva84 chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
Interesting and intriguing. I'm really curious now.
Ziva84 chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
This was funny and sweet.
Godschildtweety chapter 7 . 7/22/2011
super goood
cloisginnyharryforever chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
wonderfull story
Leibeezer chapter 7 . 4/26/2011
I loved this story!
theobsessive1 chapter 7 . 4/5/2011
This is such sweet...and not so sweet...story. I loved it! When you have the spare time, I would love to read about their future, like an outtake or something...oh who am I kidding? Babies eat up time nearly as fast as they go through a pack of diapers!

Thanks for writing(:
JXB Addicted chapter 7 . 2/8/2011
Wow! That was a awesome story! Very sweet and funny! TTFN! JXB. ;0)
kirsty-4-life chapter 7 . 1/13/2011
hehe ;)
schnurzel87 chapter 4 . 1/4/2011
hey there! )

i like the general idea of your story and your writing style is great, as always ;D but tanya taking edward's virginity? really? that just kinda made me puke in my mouth a little.. when i think of tanya i always have such a dirty freakin slut in mind that i literally don't want bella to touch any part of edward's body after he's been with her.. so.. yeah.. not a fan of that *shudder* lol

and the alice in your story is so pushy oO a little of that is just alice, i guess, but this time i just wanna kick her in the shins /

*sigh* alright, enough ranting for now those are the only things i don't like about your story anyway, the rest is awesome )
TwiGirl.Avril chapter 7 . 12/29/2010
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AngiJ chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Very cute, fluffy story :)
The Love Peacock chapter 7 . 12/1/2010
this was really good!
sarahlouise80 chapter 7 . 11/20/2010
awesome loved it.
ageise02 chapter 7 . 11/14/2010
Simply Mahvelous Dahling!

wishing for a sequel though!
shecater chapter 4 . 10/11/2010
Tanya was a major slut!
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