I think that cute make out/kinda sex thing they were doing was... really well done, actually. Like, a lot gentler and calmer than a lot of what I'm used to. It was a nice change of pace.

Hmm... I like the word Tridecaphobia to describe it better... I know it's not a real word! Don't you think I knew that? Scott Westerfield made it up. It means the same thing, but it's from Midnighters by Scott Westerfield. (Which I highly suggest, it's a good read)

Funny though. XD

~Alice-chan

Ahahaha! So this is the fic I inadvertently inspired that night in the library! I love it.

xD That was awesome.

I recently discovered this word and was wondering how exactly people who had it would like...act. O.O And you just improved the very idea of it by intorducing akuroku to it! :D

It's a really fun word to say it though. xD Along with (fear of long words, ironic, huh?).

Woah,Roxas reaction was... priceless xD

But hey... Axel got to "help" Rox xD

This is awesome! No, I suppose most psychologists wouldn't take that approach, but I certainly enjoyed it. I probably should have felt sorry for him, but I find randomly bursting into tars and running away sort of funny...

I would berate you for not updating Camp Friendship, but I got this instead, so I'm not complaining.

I get the same way writing those kinds of scenes, so don't worry. ;;

Hahah! Albeit being short and silly, this was a really cute idea. I'm not one usually for Axel/Roxas fanfiction and this one moved really fast (a little too typically/quickly for my liking, though that's just me), but the topic of this one intrigued me, and like I said-simple and sweet.

Nice job. x3