Reviews for The Darkness Beneath
Geriatric Yoda chapter 3 . 9/21/2009
I don't know what it could be down there, but I'm hoping its the Racnoss (or however they're spelt).
Geriatric Yoda chapter 2 . 9/21/2009
Very chatty in this chapter, but thats okay because it all flowed well! Nicely done.
Geriatric Yoda chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
This looks promising! Not sure I quite agree with the Doctor pouncing and punching someone like he just got out of a football game, but in all it's very good and I can't wait to read more!

I'm working on my own DW series, the first story of which is almost over. So it's cool to find other people doing the same things, and seeing how they go about it and - most important of all - reading their amazing adventures!

w1nter chapter 14 . 6/24/2009
-much whooping and cheering-

Can't wait! :D
w1nter chapter 13 . 6/24/2009
And I'm still waiting for Brittany to crop up again! :O Btw, I thought it was a little random for the Doctor to invite all the survivors to travel with him... I was under the impression that that's not a offer to be made lightly. ANYWAY... great story and I'm looking forward to more! :D
w1nter chapter 12 . 6/24/2009
Hm and two more chapters to go! (One of which is a Trailer, but hey...) I'm waiting for Brittany to take up his offer... :)
w1nter chapter 11 . 6/24/2009
Not quite sure I entirely comprehend how that last bit worked... But well done, its still great! ;D
w1nter chapter 10 . 6/24/2009
Hehehe... Brittany and the flamethrower... XD I can so imagine that happening in real life... well, maybe... 8)
w1nter chapter 9 . 6/24/2009
"...checked that all his extremities were still attached." again and as always - LOL!

And you used "unintelligible"! That had to be my all-time favourite word! WOO!
w1nter chapter 8 . 6/24/2009
The Doctor cooed? Cooed? I mean, seriously cooed? It's odd but it fits... XD just had to say something about the fact that he "cooed" something - cooed... LOL

And yet another new fave quote: "Where be those murderous beasties?” XD Are we getting Cap'n Jack Harkness and Cap'n Jack Sparrow confused? Just a question... XD
w1nter chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
Whoops, sorry - that last review was kind of not done! Just a bunch of fave quotes. Hehehe lol.

New fave quote: 'Noticing that the ground was extremely close, Jack swore. “Ah, shi-” '

Good ol' Jack. ;)
w1nter chapter 6 . 6/21/2009
you stroke the TARDIS," Jack retorted. "I've seen you. Saying things like 'who's my girl' and 'you can do it'. It's disturbing

You should see the things I can do with a paperclip."

If you don't look threatening, your enemies will often take you for questioning, from which you can subsequently escape, disabling their ship, weapons or doomsday device along the way."
w1nter chapter 5 . 6/21/2009
Fave quote: "So I'm guessing we're still in the caves. Which means we're still surrounded by a horde of evil shadow monsters that want to eat us, am I right? That's good!"

Uh-huh... he's a head case, that one. He really is, I swear. ;D
w1nter chapter 4 . 6/21/2009
Hm, well that saves me asking you whether we ever get to know from any Doctor Who episodes, specials, leaks, or whatever what it actually was on Midnight that caused all the madness... If you've got your own take on it they mustn't've told people. 8D
w1nter chapter 3 . 6/21/2009
Hey, I remember the random kewl illustrations you were doing for this... The Darkness Beneath... yes, now I remember... :D

And again with the line spacing. Please. :)
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