|Reviews for Only a Delusion|
| MysticNyx06 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I really like this... the end cracked me up bc I frequently have zombie nightmares but I really do like this one-shot.
| newyorkers chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
haha the ending is really clever!
| MotherAtHeart chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
i really like your story, i always wondered how Renesmee would find out about Bella and Jacob's relationship, and i like your explanation, i agree with you - the reason that Jacob was so drawn to Bella was really Renesmee, and their similarities, that's probably not worded the best way but you get the idea, i was a little confused at the end though, i know she's waking up from a dream and lying to jake about the dream she's having but is everything resolved? did their relationship go back to the way it was? or was the dream the entire story and she just decides not to ask him about it, sorry, i'm just confused
| ThePhantomFly chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
| life takes time chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
That was really cute!
The only thing is it was sort of messy in some parts, like words wereallstrungtogether ;P
Just re-read it a few times before posting (I always manage to miss some stuff too lol)