Reviews for A Witch Can't Love A Prince
Roxas chapter 3 . 4/6/2013
This fanfic is amazing, one of ny faborites and im wonderibg when chapter 4 will be up. cant wait
OrganizationsNumberXIII chapter 3 . 3/24/2011
you havent updated this in forever! D: i wanna know what happens!
TheLegendz99 chapter 3 . 2/3/2011
Keep up the good work! I like this story very much._
TheLegendz99 chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
i love this story! okay okay, i love how you did it in 3rd person an i think you did a great job.

i look forward to more of your work _
TheLegendz99 chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
So ... I'm looking for stories on fanfiction and I stopped in this story .. I think .. "maybe it's a good story" and eventually I was right it's a good story

The plot is amazing... I feel bad for namine, though...

"A witch?" Roxas said again. "Whoa, so she can do magic and stuff?" i laughing so hard when i read this... Its just so funny

You're good keep writing.._
Innocence and Instinct chapter 3 . 3/19/2010
sweet story! can't wait till ur next update
originalworksof chapter 3 . 7/13/2009
Okay... WOW. SO many emotions are running through me from these three chapters. I have ALWAYS loved Namine, but with this story I want to cry SO bad it's not even funny. Ya'know what? I think this story can go in my top 10. So... I hope you update soon. Real soon. And Great story. Keep it up. And about the date... with AXEL? Pure deathly funny.
Polymoly chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
This is just too good not to receive any review from me! lol.

Anyways, I like how you shape Roxas' character here. He seems so cheerful and nice. The plot twist and Namine's family background was interesting to see as well.

I can't wait to read the 4th chapter! :D
MP Shananigans chapter 3 . 5/19/2009
great job so far please update more
XShiori-chanX chapter 3 . 4/19/2009

don't hurt Roxas!

I love your story so far btw. I litterally cried.*sobs*

it's inspirational!
partner555 chapter 3 . 1/25/2009
This story is really interesting & is Ansem her father?
AgentQV chapter 2 . 12/25/2008
great story its awesome continue it please oh and merry christmas
AgentQV chapter 3 . 12/23/2008
you should really continue the story its awesome
Lebrezie chapter 3 . 12/14/2008

this story is getting really good.

Now that Namine has some friends, she is a little more - real.

and wait...were all those guys talking about her when they were saying 'oh she is so cute!' and stuff?

cause if so, then yes, Roxas does have a major problem. haha

and well...he also has a problem, because from my perspective it looks like someone wants to kill him...

anyway, Axel is in DA HOUSE! and so is Lar Lar (the evil man's - aka, Namine's FATHER) and Lar Lar is his secret agent (the person who is GONNA GET ROXAS)

anyway, Roxas asked Namine on a date...i expected her to be a little more, responsive, but i guess that is just be...taking a long time getting used to her personality.

anyway, yay Namine and Olette are friends again!

oh wait: Namine wasn't even the one that did that to Olette right? i was her father...

too bad Namine still gets blamed!

anyway, there was a little bit of flirt-age at the end.

when Roxas was like 'oh you can draw me' and she was like 'oh but i only draw beautiful things.'

i was expecting Roxas to break out the line 'then why don't you do a self-portrait?'

haha...but maybe that would be going a little to far...

or maybe u were just saving it for another time:

like when Roxas and Namine are sitting the music room...and Roxas is watching her draw...and he is getting a little annoyed with the fact that she always draws flowers.

so he takes a strand of her hair between his fingers and says, "Namine you only draw beautiful things right?"

"yes..." stuttering because she is nervous (see i pay attention to detail!)

"then why dont you do a self portrait...?"


"Because Namine, right now, you are the most beautiful thing in the world!"


anyway, so yea:

as for predictions:

i have a feeling that 'date' is going to be really weird: i mean...Namine xx Roxas xx Axel...interesting.

anyway, I predict that Namine is going to become pretty popular, i mean she is rich, and nice...and she is friends with the new kid and a person on student council...which of course will bring her attention to many guys...which will make Roxas jealous...which will make things interesting!

anyway, I am looking forward to chapter 4! (cause u said it was even better than chapter 3
Lebrezie chapter 2 . 12/14/2008
EP! the plot is getting really good!

Namine...she has a lot more personality than i thought she did!

i mean when she cried...gosh...'I am a monster.'


I bet she just covers up her personality...

anyway, Axel! he is coming around the mountain, better watch out.

yep...i just combined a country song with a holiday favorite.

anyway, sry that i am weird...

yea, oh well. back to the point:

Hayner and Olette, they crack me up!

haha they are SO about to be dating.

anyway, that is really interesting that Olette used to be Namine's friend.

oh but it was cool that Roxas used the loud speaker!

anyway, off to read more!

and yea, cereal (i am so full!) tehe.

BYE! :)
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