Reviews for Murder 20
Nicky Reid chapter 15 . 10/20/2010
whew, close call there Abs
Nicky Reid chapter 4 . 10/20/2010
ooooh, I remember yankee white
Nicky Reid chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
whew, who needs a kleenex
honeydust9251 chapter 15 . 2/25/2010
should be: "I and only I take you shooting."

But as always, good story
honeydust9251 chapter 3 . 2/25/2010
Aye-aye not eye-eye. One is an exclamation of agreement. The other is an organ in the body.
kalicious chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
That's sweet. I liked it.
Ellie Mae Thompson-Holmes chapter 16 . 6/22/2009
“Obsessively over protective?” She finished for him and watched a smile fall across his face.

“Yeah,” he nodded. “That’ll work.”

...“You’re not me. And I’m gonna make damn sure you never are.”

Aw! I LOVE this!

Great work on the entire story! I LOVED all of it!


Semper Fi,

Ellie Mae Thompson-Holmes chapter 13 . 6/22/2009
“The last thing I need is you out there playing John Wayne, just so you can have a plaque above your hospital bed.”

Tony managed a smile. “Yeah, you’re right…again.”

“Damn right I am… they don’t give those awards to just anyone you know.”

Haha, VERY cute!


Great work!


Semper Fi,

GAbbyIsLove chapter 8 . 4/15/2009

This chapter was hilarious!

“First come loves, then comes marriage…then comes a blue eyed assassin in the baby carriage…”

Ziva reached for his ear and pinched it hard. She watched him cringe and bring the car to a stop. “Okay, okay…uncle.”

“What does your uncle have to do with this?”

He rubbed at his ear and shook his head. “He’s got silver hair too…I can give him a call if you’re interested?”

You did a great job on the jokes!
Melancholy Rogue chapter 11 . 12/13/2008
Aww! Very nice. Very nice indeed.
iamscully chapter 16 . 11/18/2008
these were really great. nice variety. some really fun and cute and light, others very touching, esp. the gibbs peices where he thinks about kate and protecting abby.
iamscully chapter 3 . 11/18/2008
this is cute and sort of "aw..." poor tony.

one minor correction..."eye eye" should be "aye aye."
Eliche chapter 16 . 11/12/2008
Great work.

These worked really well, looking forward your next ones.
unique.and.proud chapter 16 . 11/12/2008
Yey :D Loved all these tags. Good job Heather, as usual! :)
unique.and.proud chapter 13 . 11/12/2008
LOL nicely done, very in character I thought :)
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