Reviews for What Am I Made Of?
Kyrrangela chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
I have to say that I loved this fanfic!
I read it completely from start to end and I don't even like to read things but this fanfic caught my interest since the start, even the tittle is interesting. I gotta say that I love Raiden and well, I'm glad I found this fanfic, this is going to my Favorites.
Thanks for making such a breathtaking fanfic.

Keep up the great work and have a nice day!

I would like to say anything else but I'm literally out of words. Great work!

-Att: Kyrrangela (Kyrr)
Zeppelin Alice chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
aaawesome
HoshisamaValmor chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
this was impressive. I should make a bigger and more developed review, but I'm tired and anyways I'm not an articulated person. congrats
Anazarel chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
uuf, this fic is very intense... It is great, reaaly, Raiden's story is very good.
river-moonlight chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Wow... beautiful... that was just... wow. I am very speechless right now.
AtheneMiranda chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Beautiful fic - I could really hear Solidus's voice here, which if it's really more like Raiden talking to himself is one hell of a headfuck! There were some gutpunching lines here, especially the ones about his fakeness and cyborg body, and the ones about his mother. It's an interesting part of Raiden's life to read and write about, this, and I think you did it really well.

[weird thing is, I wrote an MGS fic called All The Patriots' Men (not on this site because it was porny) and I didn't connect the line back to the nursery rhyme, so failed to made the leap to thinking about cyborg bodies, but that's a perfect use of it within MGS-canon.]
TheBrad chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Fantastic job mate! Even before I read your notes at the bottom of the page, I pictued John Cygan narrarating this as Solidus Snake's voice in Raiden's head as he's being physically, emtionally, and psychologically dismantled, bit by, painful bit. Once again, amazing fic.
kelsoheart chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
This is a wonderful bit of fanfiction, I think you 100% captured what has happened with Raidens life. And you get extra credit for writing one of the only Raiden fics on the site.
Andi Mack chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
This is one of the most well written and refreshing pieces of fiction I have EVER come across. Not only in this section but on this site! I was hooked from the opening line and it was absolutely nothing short of poetry down to the very last line. Amazing, beautiful, and potent.