Reviews for Villain
Kyndsie chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Niiiiiice! Brilliant and rather original.
Mary Hyde chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Whoa! Really like this take on the story. Very nice analysis.
Vkii chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Wow, this is a very different take on the usual labyrinth fic, I really liked it. The twist at the end was incredibly good. Reminds me of Asob's fables. There's a life lesson in there if you'll pay attention to it!
VickyVicarious chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Ooh, I REALLY like this. I've never read any Labyrinth fanfic before, let alone something of this type, but it's wonderful.
Edifythe chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
:D I like it! Very interesting to think about really... what made you think of this? You hadn't talked about it to this extent before... been brain storming?

;D whatever I'll see you soon sugar.

DustyDreamer chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
That was a really excellent fic. I almost screamed when i read that he didn't love her, but then again i guess we'll never know the answer to that one ;)
broadwaybabe chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
Interesting. I'm of the people that believes she DID learn her lesson, but this one is quite good. This one is finally one where is not the J/S 'ship' but he is trying to make her learn something and it works. I've read similar ones but this one somehow just works! Yay for no 'ship' and for lesson learning! or lack there
notwritten chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
This was a pleasant and cool chapter. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)
PaisleyRose chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
Interesting take, and I can see you spent time thinking this over.

I'm not sure I agree, but it is interesting...

Now I'd challenge you to take the thoughts and put a story to it.