|Reviews for Light into Darkness|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19
Please not be Dawn pairing!
| cody chapter 20 . 1/26
Dam you. You know how to write a story that can make someone cry. I hate crying but thank you cause I loved the story and since I hate reading me saying I loved a story is rare :)
Thanks for writing a FREAKING GREAT STORY!
| Maeph93 chapter 1 . 1/18
Honestly, this could be A LOT better. Fortunately, it looks as if you've improved and took suggestions. Good job.
| Tenisha moodley chapter 20 . 10/14/2013
That was AMAZING congrats and thx soooooooo much for writing for us tis was one of the best I've ever read pls write more as good as this one
Love lots Tenisha moodley (Female) :P ;) :* thx
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/7/2013
that is one of most original stories i have read Good job!
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/6/2013
I think I have found the perfect song for Ash in this story:
Kingdom Come by ColdDriven
Btw amazing story, one of my favourites,
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/3/2013
This is (In my personal opinion) the best pokemon fan fiction out there.
An amazing plot and characters (Real and OC).
As well as a very satisfying conclusion.
Thank You for this amazing story.
| Windragon66 chapter 20 . 8/14/2013
DAMN IT IT WOULD OF BEEN BETTER IF ASH COME BACK AND TRAP DAWN GOVING HER STEROIDS AND SEX PILLS FOR A PENIS IT WOULD OF BEEN THE BEST AND ASH CUTS OF HER PENIS PUTS IT IN HER MOUTH TO DEEP throat THEN CUT OFF NIPPLES AND BOOBS THEN EVERYHING ELSE LIKE HE DID WITH MISTY
| Windragon66 chapter 17 . 8/14/2013
I'm sorry but this story. JEUES DAWN SUCKS VAGINAS SHE IS WEAK BUT YOU MADE HER STRONGER THEN TE CHAMPIONS WTF YOU DUMBASS
| Windragon66 chapter 19 . 8/14/2013
I love your story but I just can't believe dawn didn't tell them why ash is evil and I would never forgive dawn I kill her JEUES IT DOESNT MAKE since WHY IS ASH SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WWWEEEAAAK WEAK HE IS STRONG ALREADY AND CAN KILL BUT HE IS A GOD HYBIRD WHEN MIX WHY SO WEAK IM SORRY SO MANY MISTAKES IN THIS STORY I GIVE A 6.5 out of 1-10 you can do better
| random chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
ebony is brown
| TankTheAuthor chapter 20 . 7/12/2013
Finally after 3 years of not reading this, I finally found it. I love this story so much. Good job with it.
| Da Da chapter 9 . 7/4/2013
Love the chapter so exciting
| Herr Mach - Der Azur Ritter chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Someone took a few lines from this chapter. The link is here:
| AshXDawn chapter 20 . 6/21/2013
Great story still,why couldn't you make ash rule the world? And also kept on writing what ash and dawn did in their PRIVATE time! It would be great if you did!