Reviews for Honesty
JustAFacelessPoet chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
I see this story it's been posted a long time ago and you probably don't write Twilight anymore; but I have to tell you anyways that this piece is very well written and is quite realistic that makes me believe that a situation like this might have actually happened in canon. The reactions were so raw that I coud almost taste the tension; good job! And without much ado, I bid you a farewell...
Eli42 chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
I loved this.
AlishaDrowned chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
I don't know why but i found Carlisle really cute at the end...
meelee72 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
"All the same, I was bleeding."
- This was so moving. I loved it. Even tho there was pain, it potrayed the very realness of their relationship & their human emotions. ... & the fact that they each learned a lesson (as it should be)... All the better. :)
I love, love, LoVeD it!
Well done.
Cris.P.C chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Wow. This was so distressing, OMG, but so beautiful at the same time… I completely loved it, your writing is awesome. :D Poor Carlisle, I thought he was going to faint, poor thing. Esme was too angry with him, but I can understand that, he lied to her too easily… And I loved the ending! CX It's an amazing fic, thanks so much for writing it! :D
Midwinter Sun chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
This was incredible. Carlisle/Esmé is one of my favorite ships. You really portrayed them in the way that I think they would have acted. It was very in character, and I was mostly able to read it in the characters' voices. I must admit, though, when Carlisle said: "I was so afraid you wouldn't come back" that I read it in Samwise Gamgee's voice. It just reminded me of when he said "I though I'd lost you" and... well, you get the picture. I had to laugh at myself, though. I like Sam too much. And Carlisle too much. And Twilight too much.
I'm not sure what else to say. But I'm adding this to my favs. *Clicks*
Best Wishes,
Jeraly chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Thank you
hollyhalebnichorelloregelolove chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Very nice! You captured their emotions perfectly!
AppealingToHeaven chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
I read a story earlier, which one I won't tell, but the indifference Carlisle showed towards Esme honestly sickened me. I believe that your story should really be the model of intentions when it comes to mates and their behaviors towards one another. I love the one-shot and appreciate the time and effort that went into Honesty. Good Job.
cinewardy chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
wow.. great story :)
Emily31594 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Beautifully written.
Covee chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Fabulous! I loved it! Carlisle and Esme are so amazaing!
lythiem chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
this is such a wonderful story!

all the words are fitting together like a great puzzle...

i could read this story a million times!

in my opinion it's one of the best fanfictions ever!

i'm sorry, i can't really tell you what i think...

my english is not so good but i tried my best to tell you how much i like this story!

i just know it because i read the german translation...

(the orgininal is better i think!)

so i send the best wishes to you from germany!
roon0 chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
This was an excellent story. Very mature and realistic I loved it.
ana4242 chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
this story was so sweat and real i hope you write more like it.
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