Reviews for 36 Drabbles: RyoSaku
HaylesHayles chapter 19 . 6/30/2009
Thanks Momo-senpai!

Nice one! :)
HaylesHayles chapter 18 . 6/30/2009
Finally! I can't believe it took them so long. But it's Ryoma we're talking about...that was to be expected ;)
HaylesHayles chapter 9 . 6/30/2009
Karupin's POV was perfect. It's fun to see the world through the eyes of a cat :)
HaylesHayles chapter 6 . 6/30/2009
Argh it's so cute when they get embarrassed - like she's always blushing and the tips of his ears get red...sweet.
HaylesHayles chapter 4 . 6/30/2009
That is great!

You sure know how to write an interesting story!
HaylesHayles chapter 2 . 6/30/2009
How sweet. I just found that story and even if I just read 2 chapters, I think it's great!

I agree, they didn't have to "practice kissing" right away.

Good work!
SnowCharms chapter 36 . 6/13/2009
I never thought that Sakuno would go as far as to just thrust her virginity at Ryoma just because he's leaving, it's a good thing that they're fated to be together or else she'll end up regretting it.

All in all, Aimi is a bitch. I bet that Sakuno would be able to trounce her in her career in a matter of months.
inner soul chapter 36 . 5/19/2009
You know, I would like to share a story about a girl who, after reading each chapter of this story, became very suicidal...

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And that girl is me..

Hahahaha! LOL! Don't get the wrong idea please, I'm not an angsty girl who hates this story. I'm not one who hates life either, in fact I love it, and one reason that I want it is because of this story. Please, let me explain myself...

I really just wanted to make a lasting introduction you know. What I meant to say was, each chapter was bliss, like heaven, that I could die already with all the FLUFFY goodness that comes with every chapter! Ahh! Each chapter was like lying in the soft airbed, listening to the happy instrumental music (note Cloud Smiles from Final Fantasy), dancing in the air, and all that FLUFFY HEAVENLY GOODNESS stuff. Seriously! It's like I'm going to get Diabetes from all the sweetness, and honestly, I would like to indulge in it more. I like the plot, first because it's SAKUNOXRYOMA, second because it's a romantic genre, and third is because it's a different/ unique story. This is different from the conventional drabble, which is just that, drabble. This story is more, drabbles that are actually full of meaning and plot as if they're not drabbles at all. Well, since I'm feeling fluffy and cheesy deep down inside, I'm going to say this. The story makes me realize that life is full of hope in terms of love, faith and everything that is good. (Yet, I was also surprised with the ending, I really thought that the whole story has been true. But well, you already hinted this in the summary, didn't you? The what could have beens if Ryoma went back from US, ne?)

So, after that "reflection paper", I will now move on to the technicalities. There are syntax errors, mind you. Like the mistakes in spelling and wrong use of words, and sometimes sentence structure. I will not be able to specify since there are 36 chapters, but I'm not saying this to tell you that you're not good. In fact, you're the opposite, I guess you just have to improve on it, scan the whole story and find the unedited stuff. With your talent in writing, I know that you will be able to improve those areas.

I would really like to read more of your stories. I'll view your page now to see if there are more RYOMAXSAKUNO stuff. So then, good luck in your writing! :D
Classicalitys chapter 36 . 5/16/2009
Hehe.

couldn't stop reading it after i started

I don't get the ending tho /

explain?
Lost and Never Found chapter 36 . 4/11/2009
Okay, this is just way too cute. I love the twist at the end! Honestly, if it isn't in your list of projects, I think you should so write a story of some sort about these two married, you write them so well, and you've sparked my curiousity. I'd help beta or play idea bouncer or whatever if you consider doing it, if you want.
Itigo Lover chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Loved it! Taisuki

Echizen Sakuno Kawai

Hehe

I loved your fanfic! Great job!

Look forward for more stories from you...

Im reviewing in the first chapter thingy but I already

read all the chapters kk? Hehe

Sayonara...jiya ne S2
RyoSaku4ever chapter 36 . 3/23/2009
stars can be seen in eyes

That was so evil...I thought it was real all along and I even thought I was gonna go blind since I was 3 inches away from the screan while reading this drabble...(i'm still dizzy)Anyway, that was amazing I so loved this fanfic. Hoping to see lots and lots more of your stories and your desserts(LOL!)Oh BTW i think you made a mistake in one of the Chapter numbers (I'll check)Good luck with your future fanfics!_

Denise:P
RyoSaku4ever chapter 9 . 3/23/2009
WOW! This chapter would probably be my favorite. I like how you made it Karupin's POV... it was very cute. Hoping to see more of your works :D

Denise
DarkAngel010 chapter 36 . 3/20/2009
THANK FOR THESE WONDERFUL STORY DRABBLES U ROCK OUT LOUD
shoka chapter 14 . 3/18/2009
this is the best story that I have ever read. Nice character chemistry!
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