|Reviews for Martin Mystery: New Beginning|
| wildchild00 chapter 3 . 2/17
i love how youhave diana figure it out
| Jeremy chapter 4 . 6/23/2011
Great story! I loved every moment of it!
If it was on tv, I think they would just have to take away the blood and some of the more violent parts but other wise, it was great!
| SunshineGirl09 chapter 3 . 4/9/2011
The plot is pretty good and you've managed to keep the character's (in character). And also the relationships between the characters. )
| lil noir neko chapter 3 . 10/8/2009
It was a good story, quick and a little rushed but good. I would have liked to see more character development and Martin given more credit but it is your story and Issac is your character. I actually like him, he's pretty cool. Good job.
| SunshineGirl09 chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
This is a really cool story...I love Diana's and Isaac's relationship. It really amazes me that you made a character that was actually M.O.M.'s son.
| Sparkles of Youthfulness chapter 3 . 2/1/2009
Overall, I enjoyed this story! Issac is a good edition, and I will read more of your stuff, you can be sure of that! So, now more review-y stuff... I went all out on this, I hope you know. xD
I was a little disappointed, seeing Issac come in the way of the 'New Student' route, but I really can't fault you for it, because even I've done that. _' That, and it's hard to think of a plausible reason for someone to come to a school, and have a reason to stay there, other than being a student. xD
M.O.M's explanation of meeting Issac's father might have been better suited as a flashback, so we could actually read about the two interacting, but if you're trying to keep readers more in the dark about his father at this point, than the explanation was a good way to go.
I DO think its interesting, the relationship Diana and Issac have. :3 They seem really close, for spending only a week together when they were... what, 9, 10 years old? I look forward to seeing it develop!
Nothing too specific for me to point out this chapter... I will say that it reminds me a bit of when Marvin showed up, how Issac just takes charge. Of course, my Inner-Martin Fangirl was pouting, cause Martin kept getting showed up. xD
Oddly enough, Issas sort of reminds me a lot of Martin, especially this chapter! He just seems... quieter about his outbursts than Martin. More self-control, I suppose.
I thought it was HILARIOUS when everyone switched bodies! xD It was probably the worse for everyone besides Issac though. Billy and Java became different species, and Martin and Diana changed genders! XD Their freak out could have been more extreme, because I can see Martin being totally disgusted, both because he's a girl, and because it's his sister's body!
That's all I've really got to add! Oh, and just ignore my Inner Martin Fangirl. She likes to complain whevever Martin is made fun of. ;D
| the Kage Tenshi chapter 3 . 11/9/2008
Wo! I liked that chapter ending!
I have your picture ready, I should be posting it on dA tonight so long as the internet doesn't give me a problem. I should warn you, I did pay a little homage for the characters that inspired his design, that, and it's an allusion to some character development with Colin Price xD. Hope you don't mind. xD