Reviews for The Blue eyed Hyuuga
NemoZero chapter 3 . 1/12/2009
a collection of clishee's. nothing more to be said. try something original next time.
imgonnadie chapter 7 . 12/28/2008
Excellent story so far. Please do continue to write.
colin chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
Will Naruto learn any justu besides the acadamey 3. Kage Bushin Daitoppa stuff like that would be great for a taijutsu user.
OnGuard chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
this has to be one of the best naruto stories out there. good character depth, smooth flowing story line, i have barely seen any grammar mistakes or spelling errors either. great job, can't wait for the next chapter.
TrueViolence chapter 7 . 12/1/2008
pretty good, but is there going to be any romance between Naruto and Hinata? the Hyuuga usually arrange marriages inside the clan, and Hinata likes Naruto, so will anything develop? again, good job so far.
Orange Lantern Tsume chapter 7 . 11/29/2008
Quite interesting. I look forward to more.
AiSard chapter 7 . 11/15/2008
loving it. though this latest chapter... well, isnt it a bit too fast? normally Genin start off with D-Ranks but this one looks atleast a C-rank turned B-rank what with the scouting party being ambushed. and that was their first mission _ bit too fast dont you think. and even if the Hokage does want them battle orientated, it wont do to just dump them in the deep end. still, with two jounin its a bit better but still /

anyways, love it and hope you update more
bored wanderer chapter 4 . 11/10/2008
Great story so far, but only one question, what happened to Mizuki and his forbidden scroll stealing ambitions? Regardless, great job. Looking forward to more of this story.
Broena chapter 2 . 11/10/2008
*giggles* I'd like to see the Hokage reading the mission report without fainting because that's ALOT of paperwork.

Good job! Good Story! *pats author on the head* Good Author!

*ultrasonic scream* You better update soon,k...please?


P.S No school tomorrow! *cheers and chants*
rosieweasely chapter 7 . 11/9/2008
i would just like to say good story but i would really like if you explain
enderverse chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
lots of spelling errors other than that awesome.
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 7 . 11/8/2008
Update soon.
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight chapter 7 . 11/8/2008
Ohh and the plot thickens.
Chewie Cookies chapter 7 . 11/7/2008
Indeed. War with Suna will make a VERY LONG mission report!

Keep up the good work!
Acedia1307 chapter 7 . 11/7/2008
update soon
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