Reviews for The Vampire's Prey
123HARMONY chapter 2 . 12/20/2016
to lucybelle omg nice start! very dramatic. mrs-lols-potter
MrsChicago88 chapter 3 . 10/22/2016
amelia chapter 3 . 8/25/2016
please continue the story.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/27/2016
Guest chapter 3 . 4/1/2016
Keep writing! ️
iLan89 chapter 3 . 3/30/2016
PLEASE update.
Your story is really really good, original. It would be a shame if you dropped it.
As for making it better, you should try to double check the tenses of the verb as well as keep the narrator constant
I know it's been years since you last updated but please... Just continue?
kittykitkat chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
I love this story!
I hate the ones where they make hermione seem like a 'damsel in distress' and she has no attitude at all
Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2015
Are you going to finish soon?
Random 8 chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
mitch404 chapter 3 . 8/1/2014
interesting i hope you update soon
CJ chapter 3 . 2/12/2014
If he was a wizard why can he fight the girl vampire off?
CJ chapter 3 . 2/11/2014
It was was a great story for Halloween. Maybe Draco should turn Hermione into a vampire and they go feed on the death eaters. Then they can win the war for the light.
CJ chapter 2 . 2/11/2014
Why don't Draco use his wizard powers to turn himself human again? Perhaps Hermione could him.
CJ chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Good story. How did Draco get turned into a vampire?
heartbroken chapter 3 . 8/30/2013
/3 i wish you would write more... i really do
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