|Reviews for The Vampire's Prey|
| amelia chapter 3 . 8/25
please continue the story.
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/27
PLEASE CONTINUE T-T
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/1
Keep writing! ️
| iLan89 chapter 3 . 3/30
Your story is really really good, original. It would be a shame if you dropped it.
As for making it better, you should try to double check the tenses of the verb as well as keep the narrator constant
I know it's been years since you last updated but please... Just continue?
| kittykitkat chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
I love this story!
I hate the ones where they make hermione seem like a 'damsel in distress' and she has no attitude at all
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2015
Are you going to finish soon?
| Random 8 chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
WHY COME THERE IS NO 4TH CHAPTER!
| mitch404 chapter 3 . 8/1/2014
interesting i hope you update soon
| CJ chapter 3 . 2/12/2014
If he was a wizard why can he fight the girl vampire off?
| CJ chapter 3 . 2/11/2014
It was was a great story for Halloween. Maybe Draco should turn Hermione into a vampire and they go feed on the death eaters. Then they can win the war for the light.
| CJ chapter 2 . 2/11/2014
Why don't Draco use his wizard powers to turn himself human again? Perhaps Hermione could him.
| CJ chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Good story. How did Draco get turned into a vampire?
| heartbroken chapter 3 . 8/30/2013
/3 i wish you would write more... i really do
| Young Heroes chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
When was the last you updated?
Oh, that's right! 2009!
What year is it?
| BigFan chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
KEEP ON WRITING! 3 ps good job